Great story! I really enjoyed the development of the characters over time through this fanfiction. Keep writing, for you definitely bring out the characters' personalities! :)
Ohmygod that was absolutely wonderful. I haven't read a great story like that in a while. I loved the concept and the way you didn't just center on kagome and sesshoumaru but instead wove a beautiful story with all the characters. Also, big props for having a lesbian crush for kagome. I always read about sesshoumaru having a gay stalker so it was nice to have the roles reversed. It was a fun read and I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you!
Nadge27 (Chapter 50) - Wed 28 Oct 2015
Really loved this story. Well thought out and developed. I felt that Sesshoumaru was treated like second best and was so not pleased lol but all's well that ends well.
Loveyaa (Chapter 50) - Thu 08 Oct 2015
What a story. Lots of be happy with who you are, give love time, family isn't only blood, and other fun little lessons. Quite the story with its ups and downs. You did a great job with it. I can't wait to see what other stories you come up with :)
This was such a cute fanfic to read. I like the way you made them end up in a sort of relationship/commitment to each other but most important of all, I love how once Sesshomaru decided that he wanted her for himself, he never once faltered in his resolve to do anything to keep her by his side. Great fanfic, please keep writing. :)
WONDERFUL! thats all i can say. i loved it from start to end. i liked how sesshy came into his feelings gradually. i know men arent suppose to show feelings b/c i would make them look weak, but not feeling anything makes for a cold, empty life. im glad he got the chance to know love and show love. great writing. keep it up and i'll read more if you do. c'ya
I have to say,
this entire story was...so wonderfully written. Kinda left a little breathless, to be honest.
Anonymous (Chapter 50) - Fri 27 Feb 2015
Awesome, especially when Sesshoumaru was in a Suit! XOXO
Loved the Story line and the development!!!!
Suka25 (Chapter 12) - Wed 11 Feb 2015
inuyasha is an idoit
No Uta (Chapter 50) - Sun 18 Jan 2015
YAAAAAAAY! What a wonderful ending! This entire story was absolutely amazing. The character development was outstanding. I enjoyed both Sai and Yasuhiro immensely, Haru as well. You have a way of having your reader fall in love with the characters you create. I enjoyed how you took us on a journey in time into Sai's past and how she came to stumble upon Naraku. I enjoyed the complexity of her character. I was thrilled with how you took the time to elaborate on each character, their own personal journeys, turmoil, obstacles etc. You focused on all the seperate relationships between all involved. Kikyo and Inuyasha, Sango, Yashiro and Miroku, Kagome and Inuyasha, Kagome and Sai, Kagome and Haru, Sai and Naraku, Kikyo and Kagome, Sesshomaru and Inuyasha and of course...Our favorite couple Sesshomaru and Kagome. I read a few reviews were some were anxious for you to get back to the main couple. I personally enjoyed how you'd break away from them to elaborate on your other characters. There were so many layers to this fic. I was swept away by it. You possess immense talent. I have enjoyed quite a few of your tales already. Bravo! Fantastic job!
No Uta (Chapter 33) - Sat 17 Jan 2015
Oh...my...this chapter is scorching hot! I have been reading this amazing tale of yours. It just keeps getting better and better. I mean...you have brilliantly incorporated, drama, passion, romance, courtship, kink, action, same sex attraction, betrayal, death, a colorful cast of new characters...sheer genius! I am hooked. I just had to comment. Ok..ok...on to the next chapters.
Ah that was very nicely finished up. American style weddings are all the rage in Japan and South Korea. They spend small fortunes on the most elaborate gowns. I was assigned in Seoul for a year and there are huge businesses dedicated to providing American style weddings. So you actually nailed it
you have got to love Miroku, he always shines when he needs to. I don't blame Sango, better to be the one and only than part of the herd. That was interesting. Yasuhiro has a herd. I loved that. It is all coming to a nice ending.
So much drama in the last few chapters. Felt bad for Sai but we knew Naraku was going to betray her eventually. Ah Kags, you always overthink everything. At least she finally confronted Sesshomaru and got everything straightened out and YEAH! They finally got together and brought the walls down. Very nice! Thank you very much! Can't wait to see how it all ends up.
Ah Sessh and Kags have come to an understanding. Poor Inuyasha and Kikyo. I always felt bad for them, stuck between life and death. So sad. I really like the way you have explained and elaborated on their situation.
The story would not be complete without a run in with Koga. Will he never learn? Looks like Sessh is working on her heart.
Chap 33: damn that Naraku, such an evil SOB. Git to love our Stella And her wicked ways!
Chap 34: ah that was so sweet. Miroku finally coming to his senses. As far as your note goes my dear, you are the author and you may lead us along any path you choose. I will gladly follow. This is a great story!
This is just really moving along. Love the dinner scene. A 21st century Kags would never put up with that! Loved the bonding over breakfast. Thanks for this wonderful story.
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