WOW. This is extremely long xD It took me hours to read... well... I was working and everything.
Huge huge world, interesting concepts... and charming children :3
Haven (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Sep 2012
Wow, I feel like I've been thwacked upside the head. You threw us into the deep end with no slow build up at all which I think is perfect for this story. I eagerly await the reveals like how Kagome came into pocession of the blade. I mean, shard of T and fang of N??!!?!! Btw, that little spider that crawls up and down her arm is just damn creepy...made more so by the fact that both Kagome and Sess are so nonchalant about it. Love it!
I like the way you're ratcheting up the intensity with this story from the start, more so than your prior ones. Very nice. Definitely looking forward to chapter 2.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
This is a different twist to there story. I like it. Can't wait to read more of it.
0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o i rather love this!
Interesting story. I already want more. Another ficcie to stalk.
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