You seem to have a thing for these baby girls lol. One son! Shippo made me cry! Great story! Loved re reading it for the second time. It was just as great this time as well
When you wrote the first line of the book rin was reading, i didnt even need you to tell me what book it was, i was just ike 'ERAGON!"
Was going back through older fanfictions and realized I started reading this a long time ago, but never finished. I'm glad I kept reading after I recognized it. I love the plot twist! It really kept my attention. Great work!
This story was very heart-warming and I absolutely love the central role Rin plays here; it is very rare to see have such a big contribution to the story. The whole memories coming back thing was quite confusing at first, but then after Sesshoumaru got his memory back after seeing his mating mark on Kagome..then everything really started to piece together. I'm sad the romantic scenes between them (especially in the bedroom) wasn't more elaborated but over all I really enjoyed this story. :)
shippos recovery took as long as it took this story to end. Don't get me wrong I like long stories and this was a good tale. But for how long it took just to get Kagome and Sesshomaru to kiss or for the story to get anywhere, the ending seemed a tad bit disappointing. I mean the final battle, how long Kags took to get pregnant, n my goodness how long it took shippo to talk all seemed undesirable
lmao when I saw this at the end " Yeah so it looks like we are getting somewhere finally.." I was like, my thoughts exactly
that was a good story...kind of funny at first...lol...n a little sad going to the end...keep up the the work...i really enjoy this story...lol
I love this story. It was really cute. I had read it before, and I still love it. Thanks for a great story.
I loved your fic!!!! It was great.
Biatorisu (Chapter 20) - Thu 02 Dec 2010
My first though was that this story was something light and sweet, but I have to say...wow! I lost many time doing my work reading it, not I have to wokr like there's no tomorrow. LOL. I loved the entire plot!. Hope to see another peace of your work soon!
Savvi (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Nov 2010
[Spoliers] I finished your story in two days, I couldn't stop reading it because I was wondering what would happen next. You included many good twists and turns, though points came across as confusing at times. I was you went into the step-father's character before and explained his relationship with Naraku. Also, the final battle seemed a little lack lustre and sudden. The stories completion was sweet, but there is also an issue with pacing at that point. You had a nice idea by follow throughout the years, I just wished you took more time in explaining those important events- maybe focusing on them instead of speeding through so many things. Great story though! I definitely enjoyed it. (:
There were a lot of twist and turns and a few expected and unexpected occurences . Love the story but I just wish Rin didn't have to grow up and marry so fast :( but it's your story and you did it justice . I loved it ! Did not want it to end but as they say good things have to come to and end . I'll be awaiting a new story from you ;) lol
This is a new favorite of mine.
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And I realize that it is late, but congratulations on the baby! :D
- Vou
MidNigh (Chapter 20) - Tue 09 Nov 2010
I really enjoyed this story!!! Its funny that Sesshomaru has a house full of girls Lol = ) Good job!
Please keep going, I cant wait to see what happens next. So please, please, please. updates soon.
Fabulous update, Angelic. I sure missed this and Mine, and have been pleasantly surprised to see both in my inbox so recently :)
I will be sorry to see the end of both of these fabulous stories and hope to see some new material in the near future....provided you have the time, with impending motherhood and just life in general.
Best wishes.
OMG!! What an awesome update!! I am so happy that Souta is back with Kagome, but wonder if he was brainwashed in order to carry orders from Naraku?? Taan, Taan Taaaaaaaan!!!
I am also glad that more memories are being recovered and that now Sessh & Kagome are stronger together to fight this time!!
Lime Goodness should be added to the next chapter (Please?) They need to reconect in more way than one and more than once!!
This story is so good I am sad to learn that it's coming to an end, and wish it would go on a lot more, but I'll take what I can and be grateful that you chose to write this great story and share it with us!!
I really look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation and hope that you can update soon!!
Thank you for writing!
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MidCat.
SEAyala10020 (Chapter 17) - Mon 24 May 2010
LLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE this story. It's the best thing I have read on this site so far, or any site for that matter. PLZZZZZZZZZZZ update. the plot is amazing and it's at the most perfect part. I hope you keep withthe story and have a new chapter soon!!!!! love it
I've been reading this story on Fan Fiction but having recently joined this site found it here with the latest update. I was so excited to see the this newest chapter. Everything is becoming apparent now. What a wonderfully complicated tale. It is awesome the way you have woven the past with the present. How some characters have had a spell cast on them while others have been reincarnated. I knew Naraku was devious but this was such a clever plan I can scarce believe he thought of it. Poor Shippo I shudder to think what has become of him. Who is the witch I wonder? I can't wait to see what happens next. When you can please update on FF too for all the fans who are waiting for chapter 17.
I'm so happy you updated. WONDERFUL chapter.
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