AHHHH IT NEEDS AN UPDATE.. WHAT AM I SUPPOSEE TO DO WITH A CLIFFY??
I think they're both wrong cuz while Kagome should have had more faith in Sess, he really cant be angry with her. If my husband told another girl he loved her and came home late practically every evening I would think he was cheating on me too, no matter how long we spent together.
rose (Chapter 12) - Fri 20 Sep 2013
they are both in the wrong she should know her man well and he shouldnt keep things for her
rose (Chapter 12) - Thu 19 Sep 2013
next chapter please
Nicka (Chapter 12) - Thu 19 Sep 2013
I think Kagome is right and wrong, she should have had more faith in the bond that she and Sess have but peer pressure can be hard to deal with. I think Koga should have kept his opinions to himself because she knows he still has feeling for her and was waiting in the wings. Inuyasha was inocent Koga really started everyones doubt. I also think Sess should forgive her, secrets always breed doubt even if the surprise is worth it.
Yeah Sesshomaru should forgive Kagome, keep it coming.
Nice, keep it coming.
I don't know what to say. Will comment after Kagome does
rose (Chapter 11) - Wed 18 Sep 2013
next chapter please
is it wrong of me to say that that is the worst cliffhanger ever? I hope you update soon because well... I hope whatever it is isn't where you are leading us. Great story though, you have me completely invested.
rose (Chapter 10) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
next chapter please
Major late, great chapter, keep them coming.
More Please :)
Although, I think the earth smell could be from a grave. Maybe he's not cheating, but is helping Shiori, since he has seen bruises on her. Perhaps he's trying to help her. Rin was his daughter, so maybe he was visiting her as another reviewer suggested. I think I like that better than the cheating, which in canon, Sesshomaru's honor would never allow him to do that.
I can't believe Sesshomaru would cheat on Kagome! She's going to be so heartbroken once Koga tells her. I hope Kagoma is able to catch Sesshomaru with Shiori at the restaurant. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Annie (Chapter 8) - Mon 27 Aug 2012
It's understandable that there would be love scenes between kagome and sesshomaru. As long as you make kagome into a badass. It would be interesting to see kouga tell kagome about sesshomaru's cheating. At first, she doesn't want to believe it, but deep down she knows it's true. To prove his point, kouga takes kagome to sesshomaru's love nest at the office. Apparentely, sesshoumaru and shoiri are there doing the "do." kouga and kagome catch them in the act. sesshomaru tries to explain, but kagome is too heartbroken, betryed and distraught to hear anything he has to say. Running out of the building, she runs home and tries to take her own life, so she can be with shippo and rin. Plagued by the images of sesshomaru and shoiri together, she takes a sharp object pierce through her brain, bleeding to death. sesshomaru and kouga come upon the scene shocked. sesshomaru gets teneseiga and tries to revive her, but she doesn't want to be revived. sesshomaru tries again and again but realizes that the sword is not working. He is brought down to his knees at the loss of his dead mate. kouga is screaming at sesshomaru, laying the blame on him. sesshomaru is too focused on kagome in his arms. kagome is visted by shippo and rin. They tell her she has to go back and it's not time for her to die. She cannot leave her family and children behind. kagome expresses her pain to shippo and rin. They comfort her and tell that the children are worth living for. She had to be strong for them. kagome makes a decision. Everybody is weeping of over kagome. Ayame, kouga, souta, kagome's mother and grandfather, inuyasha, kira and their son, mika and nira. They're asking why would kagome resort in commiting suicide. sesshomaru says he's the reason. They ask him why would he say that, suddenely the hear a heartbeat and a gasp for breathe. kagome is alive, but there is only one problem. She has lost her memory. Everybody looks like stranger. Everybody tries to do their best to help her remember. Inuyasha finds out about sesshomaru's cheating and confonts him. While inuyasha and sesshomaru are having a conversation, Mika and Kagome overhear it. Mika is disgusted by his father's actions. Mika depises his father, putting the pieces together that his father is the reason for his mother's breakdown. kagome gets her memory back. She is filled with rage against sesshomaru and plans her ultimate revenge plot. She pretends to act like she has gotten her memory back. Since hojo is back in the picture, she flirts with him to make sesshomaru go out of his mind. Take down his company and takes the kids. She leaves sesshomaru to start her life anew. She gets a complete makeover. She has a new hairstyle, new clothing, new attitude. She makes a surprise appearance at a gathering and annouces she has her memory back. Sesshomaru tries to make a plea to make amends, but she rejects him outright. Promising she will come out on top. So far this story has legs. I love it. Please update!
I can't believe Sesshomaru is cheating on Kagome, that's just wrong. I would to see more Kagome/Sesshomaru love scenes. Keep it coming.
I can
Keep it coming.
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
-Forgotten!
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