You've set the story up quite nicely, and I have a feeling that once your muse gets a hold of you, that the story will begin to unravel marvelously. The only thing I'm curious about is when you're going to introduce Sesshy into the story, and how. Goodluck, and can't wait to read more!
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
That's like a mini cliffie. Now I wanna know who Shippo bumped into. I love how your setting up the story though, we get to see a bit of what daily life for the tachi and the pace is nice and steady.
Keep it coming.
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
This story is interesting, keep it coming.
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