More soon please T-T 

Oh please update soon. This is one of few stories I've actually enjoyed reading.

Keep it coming.

In my opinion, this latest chapter wasn't very uninteresting. I like how you are not rushing through the story, but also not drawing things out unnecessarily; it's moving along great and I plan to be sticking to it to the conclusion!

Kagome comes across a little "blank slate" in this chapter. Her reactions don't really seemed to be based in emotionally response outside of moving the plot along. Just check in the future to make sure that dialogue plays out more naturally and is less stilted. Ask yourself, "Would anyone/I respond like this/say this?"

This chapter was awesome. Please continue soon.

I have just read the first four chapters and was delighted. I now eagerly (and a little impatiently, sorry) await more!

Keep it coming.

it is a very different story. i will admit i love it. great job and cant wait for the next chapter

Keep it coming.

I really like your idea, and wish you the best of luck in your continued success in brainstorming more awesome chapters!

I like your story. :D keep up the good work.  interfere*

One more thing I forgot to add.  Please don't change her looks so much that she ends up looking like a female Sesshoumaru.  Some writers have done that and it's a turn off because it would be like he was making love to himself or his sister.  I like her with her long, beautiful black hair and blue eyes or brown.  Her eyes were brown in the anime and blue in the manga so either would work.

Interesting start.  I like a powerful Kagome as long as it's more normal and not like she's all of a sudden super woman.  I've always pictured Midoriko with black hair but she could have been from a foreign country.  I don't think it's ever been said.  Also, Sesshoumaru got the crescent on his forehead from his mother's side of the family along with his poison.  The genes from her clan are more dominant in him even in the looks department.  Inuyasha is the one who looks more like the father even to the jagged stripes on his cheeks whenever his beast takes over.

I'm eager to see how Sesshoumaru and his beast reacts to Kagome carrying his father's youki.

Keep it coming.

I can't wait to see what kagome is like as a demon! I'm already excited for the next chapter. Again though, I'd really like to see your chapters have a little more substance to them. your story seems to be really great, but you have to lay everything out for us, because, the story is in your head and you can see it all playing out, but we as readers only see what you are typing.

Maybe try to elaborate about the setting and the characters emotions a bit more, not only will it help your readers' understanding of the story and what is going on, but it will also help add some length to your chapters.

I'm sure you know what is happening in your story, so tell us!

Can't wait to read more!

-Mizui

What you have is good so far and you've piqued my interest. I look forward to seeing everyone's reaction to her transformation.

P.S. You got the words plane and plain mixed up when Midoriko said it was time to send Kagome back. Plain, as you used, means bleak or ordinary. Plane can be either and aircraft vehicle, or an alternate universe/ other world of existance.

I just happened to be listening to Carrie Underwood's "Temporary Home" while I read this chapter, so I don't know whether it was your writing or a combination of the story and the song together, but I was definitely tearing up. haha. Seems like a really good story so far, but I would love to see the chapters get a bit longer. I really liked how you set the scene for the story here. I can't wait to keep reading.

This story is interesting, I just read it on fanfiction, keep it coming.

It really looks good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.