I didn't like that Inuyasha was in the birthing room but Sesshomaru was not. How is it that Sesshomaru could not smell Inuyasha all of a sudden?! Even if Kagome wanted someone to be there that someone could have been Sesshomaru once he got there. The writer went out of their way to creat an unreasonable conflict. And now you have Inuyasha the EX and person who almost R*PED Kagome as one of the first people to hold the baby?! I understand they forgived him but how the heck does he get to hold the kid before Sesshomaru. People were upset about Kagome being stronger than the guys in this story but there was something way worse it seems. I can't remember if there is a warning on this story, but if you have trauma from sexual abuse please avoid this! It's like you have to not only live with the person who tried to harm you, they also get to hold your kids first. Idk it doesn't feel great even though it was a "beast thing" 

I like this Sesshomaru. He's well written 

She needs to punish him more for what he did! I can understand she doesn't want her business out in the public infront the guards though. I just hope Inuyasha pays for what he has done!

Seriously INUYASHA!!!! 

Im reading this because a reviewer named Brandon or something below my comment made a sexist comment. Based on their comment I know I definitely want to read this! Powerful Kagome? HELL YEA!! More powerful than her man?! I'M SO THERE! Sesshomaru is already power in the OG story and I don't see what's so wrong with writing it in a different way. It's literally FAN- fiction. If they're this pressed then this story must be bloody FANtastic!

Loved the story just didn't like how you fell into the cliche that so many feminists seem to think is possible there is no way kagome or anyone could beat or surpass sesshomaru as the creator of inyuasha himself stated that after sesshomaru obtained bakusaiga and he stated it again at the end of the series that sesshomaru is the strongest character in the series and I can't stand it when a female writers can't handle it just accept it sesshomaru is the strongest and no one can surpass him  it's ok if you want to make kagome stronger but it's stupid when you expect people to believe she could surpass sesshomar if finished the series or watch the movies shit as sesshomaru is constantly showing the best feats

Love it!  You managed to make sessy in character but not a jerk! i adore how socially inept where women are involved you made him (:

Hormonal much?

Under the rules I've been taught, Rin is actually already correct. It's Kagome and me.  When you say something, the choice between 'I' and 'me' is simple.  Remove the drop-in, and read it.

The dog and I ran to the corner. (you say I, because when you remove the additive, "the dog", you are saying 'I ran to the corner', not 'Me ran to the corner'

In the case of me, Do you want to come play with Kagome and me? If you remove 'Kagome and' you are left with 'Do you want to come play with me'. Just remove the part not dealing with 'I' or 'me' and you will always know which one to use. 


--Kaminoko 

About the previous review; Maybe some more discriptions and added sentences?

Man, Sesshoumaru's going to be pissed.

I think you need to double check what you wrote for a time frame.... For instance, "Was it right after the battle that they had went to their prefered spot to become mates? Because I thought you had written that Sesshoumaru had been injured. Wouldn't he have all ready been able to smell the blood from the battle on her and Inuyasha's clothes?"

-sigh- It just feels like your missing something. Like your also jumping the gun. So to speak.

The story was amazing and I enjoyed it, I can't wait for 500 years into the future so Kagome introduce her children and Sesshomaru to her family, I'm off to read the sequel.

Love it! You ended it in the perfect place! I'm looking forward to the sequel!

-Forgotten!

Great chapter, I'm glad Kagome had two pups a boy and a girl, keep it coming.

Love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

It may be a filler chapter but if you reread how you wrote the end, the last three paragraphs, you can see it does have a slight importance on what InuYasha is feeling. You see he is feeling insecure still about everything, and that can play a big role in the future.

-Forgotten!

Keep it coming.

Great chapter Inuyasha got what he deserved, keep it coming.

I'm glad Kagome and Sesshoumaru are finally mated and the Kagome turn ito a demoness, now Inuyasha can't do anything. Keep it coming.

If Inuyasha plans to force her or throw her through the well hoping it would close behind her, I hope that plan doesn't work now that she's a youkai.  Hopefully the well will reject her or will be closed now that she's no longer human.  I have to say that I don't like stories where she's flung into the future and Sesshoumaru has to live for 500 years without her.  Just think, 1 year without a loved one is torture let alone 500!  Also, what about needing an heir to take over his lands in case something were to happen to him?  Over that many years, memories and feelings would not remain as sharp no matter how hard one tried.  Many writers don't take this into consideration, instead they want him to be tortured for 5 centuries.  I just hope you plan to keep them together because now she can still be re-united with her family the long way around.

Keep it coming.