*APPLAUDS*
I give you credit for finishing a story so quickly also for writing it quite well :)
My favourite moment was when Kagome admitted to loving Sesshy and he said "I know." I had to fight myself from sighing in content.
And her little girl sounds adorable :D
If I had been you I honestly would have updated the chapters more evenly spread, but I am happy that you didn't :)
Again I applaud you.
Zalika (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012
I loved the ending...I don't think it could have been done better.
First fanfiction I've read since I took a break from writing. Very nice, concise and not over drawn. No grammar errors that I noticed. Overall I really like it. Definatly one I will read again, when I don't know but I will. I hope to see more from you in the future.
This story was great! I love the ending, great story.
jk (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012
really njoyd it shuld be an encore of another story was sitting on edge for nxt chapter.
jojo661538 (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012
its a great story i love it very much it had a little bit of everything and i could see it really happening in the story line keep up the great work i hope to read more from you in the future ^_^
Zoku (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012
Great pace, great length, nice story, very nice job working the plot and story so that it seemed natural. I really enjoyed reading it! Great job!!
TKE (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012
Oh god I love happy endings!!!!!
this is so sweet and i love that the baby is a girl! she probably has sess wrapped around her fingers :333
I really liked the story! It was way more epic and had more adventure that I'd thought. It's also very well written and executed. I'd suggest though, writing a different summary for it, one mentioning fighting Legion and travelling with Sesshomaru to make it more appealing to the reader. When I was browsing through stories the summary and title didn't appeal to me, I thought it was somewhat vague and what drove me to give it a shot was that I saw this as a topic on the forums. I thought the title pertained to Sesshomaru and had no clue the rebellious son would have a big part in the story. I really liked that Kagome was strong, I hate when they make kags to be some whiny stupid weak woman, but you kept her strong and non-whiny. Thanks for the story, that was a good read!
YOU TOOK MY VOICES! !!!!! x= thats awesome
Laura (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012
I loved it! I kept checking all day and now this! It is a great read and thank you! :)
you! iknowi'll still get you! i'm all !!! now!
Liz (Chapter 38) - Mon 23 Jul 2012
Wow what an amazing story! I loved every chapter of it :) I enjoyed all of the quick updates and the insipiration for this fic. Good work
Pricila (Chapter 38) - Mon 23 Jul 2012
What do i think? I think is awesome, great, amazing! I loved every moment of your story, thank you so much for writing it!
Thxz for writing this wonderful story. I'm glad I stook to it to the end. I would comment more, but I'm so exhausted lol. I look forward to reading more of your stories; especially one similar to this!!!!
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! *JUMPS AROUND LIKE A MAD WOMAN*
Sine48 (Chapter 38) - Mon 23 Jul 2012
I think you did a very good job. I really enjoyed this story! Thanks again for a satisfying read!
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