Whooo, emotional. Can't wait to see the interaction between Takahashi (did i spell that right?) and Kouga because he shares some of InuYasha's traits I have a feeling that they might have a yelling match with Ayame and Kagome settling things.
Thxz for the updates, it was great! ;D
Nani-me? (Chapter 16) - Thu 19 Jul 2012
That was just splendid. I was sad for Takeshi, but also glad he finally talked and hopefully can come out better for it. Can't wait for the next updates!
I'm really lovin' our story. Takashi is learning a lot with Kagome and it looks like thats what he needs, Another support. But i'm guessing he still needs to learn more before their journey ends. Can't wait to see another update =]
wow he saw all of that....
love it
Jenna (Chapter 15) - Thu 19 Jul 2012
Sorry for not reviewing for each chapter, but I just wanted to keep reading.
I find your style of writing to be quite abrupt, not as detailed, but still easy to follow along with.
I am really enjoying the plot and the possibilities that will come along with it :)
Keep writing!
Subtlety is definitely the way to communicate with this stoic dog. Interesting how the pups react to this new pack. Bonds are created and cherished, hierarchy established by good deeds instead of force. Important life long lessons taught by one whom society deems to be a natural enemy. Great story
Perfectly done Kagome :)
Yay everyone's happy and with a very sweet ending
good chapter! and i like how kagome's pointing these things out to him! even if it means some how they'd all have to leave someday. more please!
It looks like Kagome has given Sesshoumaru something to think about.
: sighs : Yes, that is a complicated subject, much more to Sesshomaru who si the leader of the West.
Lol! Splash! And the :( Oh God! Poor Takeshi :'(
I am so glad he seems to be getting better ;)
I loved the General too ;3
The ending was a bit sad but I like were this story is headed and I absoultly loved when Kagome thought 'like a boss' I laughed so loud and it's like the middle of the night, I can't wait for more funnyness
Sine48 (Chapter 14) - Wed 18 Jul 2012
Thanks for the chapter. Again, I'm really enjoying your story and eagerly anticipate the coming chapters.
So like his Uncle! I love him xD I can't believe I said that >_>
Kagome is a SAINT! Her patience is remarkable! :)
Maybe he'll let Kagome comfort him soon. :)
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