hn, interesting. post the next chapter soon.
DH7 (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Aug 2008
THis isn't canon D:
Jill Dozer (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
It's a good story so far but for a suggestion you should put a space between paragraphs I find it a little hard to read your story when it's like that.
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