U gave the plot everything it needs to become a really good story. Ir writting skills are highly developed.
I love your story so far! So many times I'll read a summary that seems to hold promise, and then within the first 2 chapters that hope is dashed. The characters aren't acting like themselves, the grammer is horrible, or some other set of problems that make the story an almost physical pain to read. Your story has everyone with theyre actual personality, and the grammer is perfect! I can't wait till the next chapter, and I hope that it comes soon. So, until then, may your muse visit soon and often.
itoe hime (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Jun 2013
I really love what you've written; it has so much emotion and makes me feel light-hearted like a kid reading a fairy tale when reading this. I am officially hooked. Please continue to update this story regularly.
I love shippou's and kagome's relationship in your story...i wonder what shippou gave her that made her cry. and i wonder how Sess will play in your story as Kag's lover... can't wait until more of your stories unravel.
thx for an interesting read!!
Keep it coming.
I am really liking this story! Please continue~!
UPDATE
Please!!!
Zero Serenity (Chapter 6) - Thu 13 Dec 2012
this is the first time i've read any of the fairy tale fics and i really like it. it's cute and fun and seems well written. I look forward to updates =D
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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