Even with Kagome's setback in her health, I'm glad she's moving around a lot at the end of the chapter. I understand her feeling on not wanting to be a burden on anyone.

The ending was amazing though. I feel like most people have felt that feeling of our heart stopping when you get that first touch, especially when it's on purpose! Now I'm craving for the next chapter! :DDDDDDD

Have a great time in France, and safe travels! I hope you keep some ideas in  mind while you're away for this story. :)

What a fun and original story. Sesshy doesn't know what he has gotten himself into, Kagome will slowly wear him down and before they know it, love will blossom. I love it! Thanks for the story.

I can't recall any errors. Thanks for writing, can't wait for the next chapter! Ja ne

freaking awesome story you got here!! got me hook right away!!!!!!!!!!!! plz update soon!!! XD it's sooooo awesome that im crying tears of joy!!! i can't wait for an update! <3~

Awwww I loved this!! <3 As /annoyed/ as he is, he's coming around :3

Great job, Maddie!

Keep it coming.

I like your story very much. I love the idea of mating out of convience and obligation, it sort of takes the story in to unfamilar territory.  Which is ofcourse good.  I like how you portray the complex emotions of the characters with out romanticizing them. Your story is unique with it's sharp take on the world. I look forward to reading more.

Thanks for writing, can't wait for the next chapter! Oyasumi!

This is so interesting and a very different take on the typical modern relationship between the two. I love the way you've done it and I can't wait to see more :)

Keep it coming.

wow! something to help relieve my obsession with blood stained! love your talented work. keep it up!

Awww :( its a love hate relationship :) in a way...

I like how he is giving her all these opportunities, even if she sees it as being a caged bird. Something tells me they will grow to like eachRotherham :)

This is definitely something i look forward to seeing unwind and develop. :)

Keep it coming.

I read this as a one shot and I'm super excited to see this as a chapter story. That is quite the gift he is giving, and I hope tht it does actually heal her fully. There is already so much emotion and I have a feeling that it is bout to be kicked up a notch. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

moooorrrreeeeeee! 

Awww! Yes! I knew you'd fix it! Go Sesshou! Save herrrr :) but I have to say I am quite curious about how the mating will go without the sexual part of it. Can't wait to read it! I'm am so hooked by this already!

Simply amazing! I can't wait for the rest to come out!

Great story, please update soon.