Aagh! The suspense is killing me. I don't want to read because if Kagome really dies I'm going to cry. But your writing is so good that I have to know what happens next. You are indeed an excellent writer. I hope that instead of dying the Jewel actually sent Kagome back to her time since her mission was over. I'm also really hoping Sesshomaru has a happy ending. Regardless, again, wonderful story. Thank you for updating.
Good chapter, keep it coming.
And Shippo laid down the law! I always love seeing these updates. I think this story should end with her falling through the well. I'd almost skip the whole shard journey and pick up after with her survival/death however out happened.
ninja (Chapter 30) - Thu 08 Jan 2015
I'm so happy to see this updated, I know real life can be a bugger but thank you for writing. I would say leave it for a separate story. You could just mention the major points only in this story and write Kagome's POV with adventures in another story.
Debra (Chapter 30) - Thu 08 Jan 2015
Good chapter. I think it would be good if once she goes back in time you start showing just things Sesshoumaru remembers about their past. Since we already know the story. Maybe add in Shippo too, since he is a big part of the story. Not to mention it sounds like he was there when they lost her not Sesshoumaru.
I seriously hope the jewel just sent her back to her time. Sesshoumaru deserves to be happy. Not to mention it would suck to cut her life so short.
I think it would be awesome to continue it through her life to see if she really died or if she was brought back to the future.
I'm not surprised Kagome forgave Sesshomaru but I am glad Sesshomaru got off his depression wagon and spent time with Kagome. She's still a child and has a few years before going back to the past. Not only that but he could support her in her greatest time of need and help her.
I'm crying so hard right now.
Not hard, but there are actual tears.
Gosh.
What is up with this. This is just too great.
You could follow through in 3 segment books. Or a single long I think if you do it will be about 150 to 200 short chappies but you will have fun with it... And leave us guessing till the end if Sessy gets DA Girl....
Nice chapter, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
So, she apparently died... or did she? Hmmm. I'm not convinced enough.
So very glad to see you back with us!! As a fellow Who-vian, I feel your pain. I am very glad to see you writing for the Inuyasha universe again and continuing Petite Problems! It's interesting to see how Sesshoumaru handles the knowledge of what may happen, but again, we don't know the full story. "The jewel took her..." is so vague, but so very intriguing! Best of luck with school, and I look forward to the next installment!
Debra (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Jan 2015
Good update. You feel bad for both Kagome and Sesshoumaru.
adptt12 (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Jan 2015
Doctor Who is a perfect reason to do anything.
Paperwing (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Jan 2015
Oh goodness. The angst is something awful. =( Make some happy chappies soon please!
awww please don't kill Kagome! My heart broke for Sesshomaru because of what he is going through but on the other hand, Kagome's not even gone down the well and all she knows is one of the most important people to her broke his promise to her and it ruined her birthday. She is, after all, just a child......
Oh my...
I'm actually crying. Like, seriously. Tears came out. This is heartbreaking on so many levels...
Next chapter please!
Oh please don't kill her, you'd just become like Moffat and destroy all our hopes and dreams! WaH! I love where this is going, but please don't kill her ;_;
As much as I love this story, becoming addicted to Doctor WHo is an acceptable excuse for not updating...
Ah...a fellow Whovian :)
Love this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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