Reviews for Clash of Alphas by sarhea

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sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 12) - Mon 02 Apr 2012

oh i do love this :3


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 11) - Mon 02 Apr 2012

NO! NO! Please do not stop here, continue on with this story. I MUST know what happens next.


martha (Chapter 11) - Mon 02 Apr 2012

wooo so can't wait for next chapter hehe


RubyJeweler (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Looking forward to the "explicit" scenes coming up in the next chapter. Haha.


cassandra (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

This is getting good!


KT (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Two updates in a day!!! AHhhh, and you stopped at the best part T-T 

Update soon please??? I love this story, and it really makes my day to see you update!


Avidreader (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Oh shiza!  That is...awesome!  nice move beast - hopefully the next updates will be quick???


Ravijnem36 (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Look and be amazed as Sessh shows his made Zorro impersonation skill!! Kag can't see how funny the way she loses her clothes is, (mostly cause it's happening to her..) so in her place I will laugh hysterically at her. Hahahaha

 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

i just giggled at this :3 so awesome!


Faded Names (Chapter 9) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Can't wait for the next update!!!!  ^.^


Faded Names (Chapter 8) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

No leash! No leash!!!  lol


Faded Names (Chapter 7) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Awwwwwww...!!!!!!!!!


Kristen (Chapter 9) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Nooo, not again :[ I miss them already ;_;


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 9) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

I am so enjoying this series... so much fun imagining the rampage Kags went on over the b-word, then the abject horror and fear when she ran from him.  And to think, she just unwittingly submitted - this is gonna get even more fun!!  Thanks so much for sharing all your creativity with the rest of us!

:D

~~Wiccan~~


RubyJeweler (Chapter 9) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

Cute story! I like it.


KT (Chapter 9) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

Ha ha so like Kagome to turn this into a petting situation.  LOL I love this story, please give me more!!! XD


Amai Youkaiko (Chapter 9) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

I'd sign in but my computers being buggy, :(.

I'm actually really liking this, it's so cute! And realistic too, you would not believe the amount of fanfictions I've read and thought 'well, I can totaaaaly see that happening', of which this one doesn't have the sarcasm in the sentence.

Overall, I think it's brilliant!


Diane (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

Enjoying this. Just as an FYI Inuyasha's sword is spelled as either Tessaiga (Japanese) or Tetsusaiga (goofed up US version). 


jenny (Chapter 9) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

I really like this story but I'm a bit confused about parts of it that I don't understand. The parts that I find confusing are these-(copy & paste from the chapters they are from)Ch.4-(Sessh's thoughts) He wondered why the hanyou bothered with the flimsy pretence. No one believed he was the Alpha in his pack. Sure everyone humoured him, but it was only to soothe his pride because it was very clear it was the miko who was Alpha.

She was the one who made the decisions. Which direction the pack would travel, when they would take a break or set up camp, she procured food to feed her pack mates, and she determined who ate what and how much.(Isn't he stating that Kagome is the Alpha female of this pack?)

Ch.8 has 4 paragraphs & in P.1(it states)Kagome did not know but in the daiyoukai’s mind she was one of the few strong enough to challenge his authority and make it stick. In P.2-(1st Sessh admits/thinks this)But with Kagome… the daiyoukai was not so certain that he could defeat her; because with her it would not be a clash of blades but a battle of wills. She was strong, stubborn, and absolute when she gave her loyalty. If she ever chose to move against him she would be a formidable opponent. Sesshoumaru knew that on an intellectual level and his beast knew it in the most primal of ways.(Doesn't the fact that in Ch.4 admits Kagome is the Alpha female & then in Ch.8 both he & his beast aren't certain he can defeat her imply that Sessh sees Kagome as more of an equal than one who is lower than him?)At the end of P.3(he then thinks) It was truly unfortunate the miko had reached a level in his circle that made it dishonourable to kill her. It would solve so many problems.(I don't understand-In CP.8, P.2-he & his beat were uncertain he could defeat her & in P.3,it's like he's implying it'd be easy to just kill her?)  

In Ch.8,P.4-(His thoughts are)But then again killing was rather tedious and unsatisfactory. Making the miko submit would be more of a challenge. The miko had to be made to submit, to see and accept that she was below them in strength and authority and that he was Her Alpha… that she was willing to accept his control, to be leashed.

I don't know what it means,in this story;for him to make her submit, what he has to do to make her submit to him or what it means for her to submit to him,accept his control & to be leashed. I don't know if it invloves anything sexual or if she's still a virgin(in this story) or if a females virginity is important in a pack(in this story),if it's considered dishonorable to take a females virginity unless you desire her as your mate or if Inu youkai mate for life (in this story),but I'm dying to know and I hope we find out. I believe that the Alpha male is #1 & the Alpha female is #2 in pack society and Sessh has already admitted Kagome is the Alpha (female) of her pack,that their packs are now combined and that Sessh is THE Alpha (male) but I have to wait and read to find out's going to happen,if anything,and what  will happen afterwards. I can't wait.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 9) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

lol part of me kinda wants him to use his jaw to make her all squirmy  and 0o0o0o0o x= b/c how does one deal with getting turned on bu a chin?


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