He really is a too-noble-bastard, but knowing me, that's why I love him so much. Good set-up so far. Liking it pretty well. Sorry for the first couple of reviews, I really don't think I could have stopped even if I had wanted to. ;)

Post-coitus doesn't count as 'something good happening' or am I crazy and those were other characters.

Reaching beneath the sheets, he pulled out a small, sapphire puppy and wondered briefly where it came from. Decided it wasn't worth the wasted energy thinking, he promptly unhinged his jaw and ate the thing ... ....

Oh wait, sorry ... that's just how I imagined it ... ... ... never mind then.

And then a rude, nameless person put out the fire with a helpful bucket of water ... ... ... and a giant rubber fish pulled from the middle of nowhere, but that's not the important part.

I've changed my mind ... I'm not high ... I'm drunkedness ... WOOOT ALKEHOLS!!!!!

This chapter was wonderfully written and so full of sorrow. I cried. I cried and had to wipe my eyes repeatedly. I had to pause and try to read it again when I couldn't see or the emotions were just strong. I just, I just really feel sorry for Kagome.  I can understand that guilt, although it's not really conceivable for it to truly be her fault. She wanted to get out of an extremely abusive relationship, and although seeing as it says "she was the only who didn't survive" I may have mixed up what where went where, I believe he went after more than just Rin and her, in return.  That man sounds psychologically unstable.  Though I don't agree with it, I can understand where her guilt comes from, and this emotional expression of guilt had me crying and has left a distinct though unidentifiable feeling in my chest.  Beyond this, *shit eating grin* I was kinda hoping Sesshoumaru would appear during all this, but I don't really know if he'd be ready, Kagome either.  Now that I think about it, it might not be a very pretty sight.

--KD

Awwww..... so sad...... this is such a good story.  More! please?

I thought 'chocolates for rin' was an dorable idea! ^.^

And sesshomarus chapter made me wanna cry! can not wait to see what happens next!

Omg, the suspense is killing me! when are we gonna find out how rin died?

I like your story but sometimes I get a little confussed when it goes from Sesshomaru to Kagome. Other than that I like your story.

*thats what drabbles are supposed to belike is what meant to say :)

Honestly, I have no idea what that other reviewer was talking about. It makes just enough sense that you get the gist of going on, what drabble fics are supposed to be like. -_-

I think this fic is great, listen to anyone who says otherwise.

I don't think it's confusing.  Granted, it's a different way to write because you're not going into great detail, particularly with Rin. It's like dangling a little wrapped gift in front of someone and telling them they can't know what's in it until they reach it.... and never quite being able to reach....grr...  >:)

Anyway, They may be confused with the view changes, but again, you are doing that with each chapter, not each page with no break point.  You're doing fine and still driving me (and I'm sure some others) nutz.  :)  Keep it up, can't wait for more!

Aw, poor kagome! I wonder who this mystery ***hole is, and I hope something terrible happens to him ;)

I thought that was perfect! :)

Long enough so you got a good grasp of their feelings but short enough to keep you wanting more. 

I wait to see what happens next!

I wonder what happened to little Rin? When will Kagome and Sesshomaru finally meet up? I'm just dying to know!

These chapters are a decent size for the way you are drawing the picture in my mind....****but I gotta know what happened!*** You can tell your doing such a good job because you're driving me a bit nutz. :)

Can't wait for more!

Really good chapter, the emotions of the character were really well done. I can't wait to see how Kagome is connected to Rin!

Update Soon!

Til next time, Lovely

These last few chapters made me wanna cry...Good job! XD

I cant wait to see how this story plays out. ^.^

Awww.... What happened to Rin????  Will this be like a scene from Cinderella, but instead of a show, there will be an earring?