In the words of Inuyasha, "Fan- fucking Tastic",Wonderful, sweet, loving, and most of all,Fan-fucking tastic, more, more....
Stengel (Chapter 8) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
Best line in this chapter:
"It ripped at her mind and pulled at the fabric of her perceived reality."
This creates perfect imagery, and shows just how grand the pain is.
You have a wonderful idea and your writing style is great.
You do some misphaps and awkward phrasing at times, but hey, we're all human.
rose (Chapter 20) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
i love this story do you have anything else out so i can reas it
Haven (Chapter 20) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
Wow, I really enjoyed this story. What a wonderful little surprise. Destiny is just kick ass and I think you captured papa Sess very well. Foul mouth Kags is hilarious, too. I love you all the more for a finished story -- you don't know how much that is appreciated. I hope you write another story as I'll be on the look out! Thanks again!
jenny (Chapter 20) - Wed 21 Mar 2012
This was a great story but in 300 yrs why didn't Sessh & Kagome have any pups together?
Charlene (Chapter 20) - Wed 21 Mar 2012
| In all the stories I've read I don't think I have ever been so disgusted by InuYashas failure to take care of his niece. Having grown up the way he had, I would have thought better of him. Kagome did the right thing in turning him human. No longer having his demon strength to rely on and hopefully taking away his ability to have children was not really near enough punishment in my opinion. I was disappointed in not finding out more about Rin, or maybe not, since in my mind she can still be the cute little girl with the bright smile and silly ponytail.
The ending chapter was more than I expected. I knew it would probably be good but had not expected it to grab my attention so thoroughly.
What can I say but I really enjoyed it...except those words are not really strong enough to express how it made me feel reading it.
damn good story!
Bellinia (Chapter 20) - Tue 20 Mar 2012
I really loved your story. Kagome's character is quite refreshing as the no bull s**t kinda girl.I would have like to know why Rin was banished though and what happened to inuyasha after he turned human. But overall great story
rani (Chapter 20) - Tue 20 Mar 2012
i liked your story
Kayelyn (Chapter 20) - Tue 20 Mar 2012
Spek, this was AWESOME! I really enjoyed the banter between Kagome and Sesshomaru, as well as the witty commentary in between. Please don't hesitate to post your work EVER again, or I will come find you and chain you to your computer until you do! Can't wait to read what else you come up with! Much loves...
This was a rather interesting fic, from beginning to end. I'm still wondering where Inuyasha ended up after being purified into a human. I guess that would be left to the imagination. He most likely ended up in another country, maybe mainland China to start a new life away from the only place he's ever called home or maybe a distant island somewhere in the Pacific. Anywho, this was fun to read.
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