I loved the story. I have not read another like it. I love the fact that it's really original.  I do wonder what happened to Rin she was always a favorite character or mine. I hope you write more stories and wonder if you have more on other sites.

This was very good but I wish it had not ended so soon. I wanted to find out what happened to Rin.

What happened to Rin? I thought that was going to be mentioned. Overall, I like the story though, in my opinion, it ended too soon. 

Loved the story, really fantastic!

This is the second time I read this story the last battle is epic.  Love the story.  Great writing. 

I really liked your story, so much emotions! The only thing i could think about was the sudden dissapearance of Rin, as it seemed that she was merely written off without an explanation...i still cant imagine what she could have done to make sesshy do such a thing as send her away. Thats all i missed in this lovely story X3

OMG!!! This story!!!!! This story made me leave ff.net. It was on my favorite list and then one day I couldn't find it anymore!?! So here I am and it is just as good now as it was the last time!!!! Great story!!!! Truly one of the best I've ever read!!!

Very well written.

I enjoyed reading this story a lot. You definitely had a unique idea when you put this together.

The major thing that took away from the enjoyment for me was the age and lack of any training for Destiny; it pushed my ability to suspend disbelief to the breaking point all the way through this story. I spend a lot of time with 5 year olds, and the fact is that they have a hard enough time dealing with scissors, forget the level of swordsmanship needed for her to hold her own, injured, as often and as long as she did. If that wasn't enough, you can't deal with paperwork if you can't read and write, and no 5 year old of any thinking species has the physical, mental, or emotional development to even deal with just the desk work of ruling a territory as large abe prosperous as you created for the Western Lands. The only way I had to deal with my inability to suspend disbelief was to pretend that Destiny was older than she was written to be and had at least some training in both martial and academic arts.

All that being said, the wah that you wrote Destiny's emotions throughout the story was brilliant, especially her eventual breakdown when she caught her father's scent in the bath. 

that was amazing!!! but I really want to know is ... what did Rin that was so unforgivable?

I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS STORY. I LOVE IT!!!! :D <3 <3 <3 <3

Pretty bloody in the end. I am curious though. What exactly did Rin do to get her "banished" from the Western Lands?

Wonderful story! I finished it late last night, so I didn't have a chance to review until now. I really enjoyed how the story went through the progression of their relationships through both the difficulties and the times of peace. I look forward to reading more stories!

Thank you for sharing your talent!

Kousei

I just found this story and I love it! Really, really love it!

-Forgotten!

this was amazing. wish there wasmore

Well I might have somehow missed it but what happened to Rin? I didn't get what happened to her!
Nice story but I wish I knew what happened to the others - Kouga mated Ayame? Sango and Miroku? Kilala? Did Shippo have a mate?

i absolutely LOVED it!!! i read this in one go and i must say the past hours were spent well. though there were a few spelling mistakes they could be easily overlooked because of the amazing plotline and seriously it really didnt take away from the reading enjoyment. as i said before i loved your story and am very happy you decided to post it! thank you so much!

That was the most badass story I have ever had the pleasure of reading! Kudos to you, truly, for you deserve every bit of it. I will admit that the style and grammar was only SLIGHTLY off but the characters and such were beautiful. Kagome was the best, as was the revealed side of Sesshomaru. I have but one question: what exactly IS MokoMoko-sama?

Please, continue to write - you have my full support.

Hmm, you only did it twice but you ended two early chapters with narrator ends. Which didn't make sense. I'll check it out later and let you know which ones. Decent ending, not the best I've read but it makes the list of ones that I like. I do agree with some of the others, I would like to have seen more of Rin. The way you moved her aside was kind of like a kick in the balls. I can't remember what it's called though, there's a term for it whatever. Good story. Needs a little more editing though.

I like the story... it's just... there's nothing really there. Five chapters of total focus on a single character with nothing to really break the tension. I'm not saying that's bad but it just kills it, to out it lightly I hate angst parties. Other then that the story is good so far. I'm going to try and keep going, not sure how far I'll get through.