Funny

It flows nicely and it's well written. The conversation is also easy to follow and understand. It's an interesting idea. You should at more detail to your story as you grow and develop the characters as you write the story. I can't wait for the next update.

I relly like it. Can't wait for the next chapter

I LIKE THIS PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

I want to read more ! I love it please update

A good start.  Sess is a bit OOC, but it's workinig.  Can't wait to see where you take this.

like like but sess is too ooc.. but also perverted so it's ok   ^.^

Adorable chappie, more , I want to see his reaction when he sees his kids!