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Ceferadel (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2012

I LOOOOVVEEE this story!! OMG I can't wait for the next chapter. Evil Naraku will eventually die by Sesshoumaru.. lol I can only hope!! -Cef


Silvermane-Eclipse (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2012

Heyya.. Actually, I haven't been on for a very long while and kinda miss this place where I can let my imagination run wild. You have a very interesting and lovely plot going on for you. LOVE THE STORY, BTW!! Hurry and continue. You have fire up my partially dead brain, my dear, and to stay dormant for too long might as well be my version of apocalypse. However, keep in mind that a dictionary at hand is always a great company when one is sceptical about ones own spelling and use of words. It may sound the same, however the spelling gave off different meaning and can easily confuse others. As well, shorter lines are much easier on the eyes. Observe other writers... I learned this the hard way. It will be a waste if such a great story is hard on the eye. Especially one such as I who is near/long sighted. However, keep on writing as your heart desires. You have a wonderful imagination. Love your story from the bottom of mine heart..


Trice (Chapter 5) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

I am really am glad that you continued this story and did not go by the number reviews you receive. Your story is unique and comes from a different angle of the slave and master. I am enjoying how you are intermixing your own characters with the ones we are familiar with I find myself really in grossed in your story and cannot wait until the next chapter is loaded. You truly have a gift in writing because you really capture me with your words and I can invision the scenes as I read your story. I look forward to reading and seeing how the story unfolds. 


BlueTwilite (Chapter 5) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

I LOVE IT! Please update soon! <3


Rose (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

Alright I am going to start out by saying this. I never write reviews on any stories what so ever. You have earned a great honor. I don't remember the last time i wrote a review on anyones stories and believe me that is a lot of stories. I am surprised with the lack of reviews on this story. It is so good. With each chapter that y ou have written it had kept me with in an inch of loosing chair because i kept creeping closer to my computer wanting to make sure I never once missed a word. You keep your reader on edge throughout each chapter and that is a very hard feat to accomplish. I congradulate you! This story is very good and I am excited for the next chapter in hopes that sesshomaru rips narakus head off his shoulders. of course not next chapter but sometime in the future. Awaiting the next chapter!!!!!!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 5) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

I'm Way past when I should be asleep so please forgive me if there are parts of this review that make little to no sense but after reading this chapter I couldn't NOT review! I could hardly wait either!

Although painful... the vivid imagery given to the extent of Sesshomaru's damages was awesome. You didn't have to describe each lasceration to show how really bad off he was with how long it was taking them to heal him and the continual changings and clensings. It really emphasized how strong Sesshomaru's youki was upon its release when he healed himself.

Speaking of which... Booyaka! Kagome has the most utterly loyal of guard dogs now! :happy dances: THAT'LL throw a monkey-wrench in Naraku's plans For Sure! I'm totally stoked!

I just hope it's not Kouga at the door and that if it IS... Sesshomaru doesn't take him out in his protection of Kagome.

Oh... and I'm totally loving their souls calling to each other. I hope to see more of that significance.

...and now... I crash. So tired. ^_^

Thanks so much for writing!


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 4) - Wed 07 Mar 2012

I'm a wee bit worried about her condition of if she dies her closest kin gets the slave...first of all what's to stop her dad from killing her to get the slaves if he finds out about it? and who's her closest kin? would it be her brother or could one or both of her parents try to get the slaves? or they might try to manipulate her brother with having the slaves do what they*her parents* want...

 

SO...Shippo is a lil motormouth...I hope he didn't say too much info about it in case bad humans might try to find the freed slaves so that they can capture them and sell them or something...I hope Kagome sets up some kind of barrier around her property so that other mikos and monks who would hurt her friends won't be allowed in...sutras and other enchanted objects that would be used for bad too would be good to use a barries to keep out.

 

interesting story...wonder what Sesshomaru will think when he comes to...and when they get back to the cottage. SO...Kagome has a denmother or something at her cottage to care for the little ones? are there any other child youkai/hanyou on her property or will she start trying to get more kids to help her?

 

SO...since Naraku doesn't know about Shippo and Azure Kagome can free them but she can't free Sesshomaru or the female currently right?


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 4) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

Fascinating story so far. I love how you're bringing all the characters together -both canon and original.

I look forward to seeing how Sesshomaru will react upon meeting Kagome. Thankfully your Kagome is strong enough to be able to control him for the time it will likely take to calm him down enough to Listen. That is if he is not aware/awake to get some sense of it himself as she sees to it that he heals.

I shall have to re-read to check whether the Red she bought was one of the pups for whom Sesshomaru bartered. Their names mostly slipped to the wayside other than Azure's once I read them.

I DO wish you would go through your story for better spelling and grammar. Particularly mixed words: there/their/they're, your/you're, but especially using "holly" where "HOLY" should be. That last makes it very difficult, for me, to fully immerse within the story. Rather... it's much like hitting an invisible barrier while driving down the road: a jolt that makes one blink then readjust. Working on such things would greatly improve the story's quality.

Thanks for writing!


Koi (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

Niiice! I would love it of you could please continue this story. I love the way this story isstarting off. Pure Kagome meets the tainted Sesshomaru. Mmmmm this is gonna be a goooood story. Ppllllease continue this story for me!^-^


khandiland (Chapter 3) - Sun 04 Mar 2012

Awesome!!! Im really liking this story.


lonelylulaby (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Mar 2012

You have to continue this story.  I think it has great and wonderful potential

 

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work


Yuri (Chapter 2) - Sat 03 Mar 2012

I would really like you to continue this.


Roxette (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Mar 2012

Beautifull! i can't wait for the next chapter ! 


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