Sorry wasn't logged in. So. Yes, wonderful story and as I said take it piece while eduting.
He's are where the she's are in some places, mystery was spelled wrong, and there was an incorrect noun in the sentence that involved I think hojo or before the well, but all in all a rewarding chapter, take it piece by piece with editing, some may just be typos like 'adn' which was in there. I hope you continue this soon.
Jenna (Chapter 2) - Wed 20 Jun 2012
Though the chapters are teasers each in their own way I really like this so far. :)
Interesting. Can't waitfor more chapters.
Great story, I read this story on fanfiction.
I like it. :D That would be horrifing as a kid. The face in the well not helping. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Suka25 (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 May 2012
This is a good story!
Lovely! please please more! update soon!
I'm soo excited to see what happnes next!
I love your story so far. Can't wait for another ^-^ nice imagery to.
fredisagirl2 (Chapter 3) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
This is starting off interesting. How far back has she fallen? Hope to read more soon.
Hanatsuki (Chapter 3) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
This is interesting, not what I thought it would be from the summary. I like it a lot. The details fit well with the original, especially about Kagome and the well, though I never pictured Sesshomaru as curious. I suppose he must be, otherwise he would have never kept Rin, and it truly is a dog trait. I look forward to the next chapter.
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