You used the term "jewel shard" when you should have just used jewel, shikon no tama, jewel of four souls, or whatever variation suits your fancy. Also, the pacing is a bit rushed and hard to follow at times. Maybe adding some more dividers might help? Other than that, it's great to see an update. Keep it coming!
I'm glad your back it's been four months and a week since you last updated. Great chapter, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Oh, I can't for the next one! Will she remember all of it or just bits and pieces? What is Inuyasha going to do? Two and Twenty? If that's your birthday then,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ^-^ Cheers
Mary (Chapter 7) - Wed 07 Nov 2012
This story is absolutely amazing! I love this tender, caring side of Sessho! Please update again soon! I'm dying in anticipation
Saya (Chapter 7) - Sun 30 Sep 2012
AAAAAAAAAAH!!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAAAAAAAPTERR!!!
Pricila (Chapter 7) - Sun 09 Sep 2012
Excellent read and original! Please keep it coming, I have no idea about the wait time between chapters but hope that I will not have to wait long for the next!!
Can't wait to see what age kagome visits again
Misha (Chapter 7) - Tue 04 Sep 2012
Nyx (Chapter 7) - Sat 25 Aug 2012
I was just thinking about this the other day. Thanks for the update.
Ravijnem36 (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Aug 2012
Oh i love this! Inu no taisho always knowing something everyone else doesn't. Hope u update soon.
jojo661538 (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Aug 2012
there are a few were you write him instead of her and stuff but its such a great story you could skim through it like if it wasnt there anyways keep up the great work i remember reading this quite a while ago im happy you started writing it again hope to read more soon ^_^
Suka25 (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Aug 2012
Poor Sesshoumaru!!
~*Dragon*~
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Suka25 (Chapter 6) - Thu 12 Jul 2012
so sweet!!!
~*Dragon*~
I read this story on fanfiction, keep it coming.
Love how you have little Kag just start talking and talking, I can almost picture Sessh with a lot of question marks going around his head.
keep it, wonder how Inu papa is going to act.
Amazing. I love this story.
Update soon please.
-':)
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