;_;The first few chapter had me completely emo. Great job, can't wait to see what happens and what Jaken found out.

This is a sad but good story. I think it's sweet that Shippo's trying to help Kagome. I only hope that Sesshomaru honors his brothers deathwish. Update soon!

Why is the writing so small?

It brought literal tears to my eyes. You did a good job. Hope you'll continue and keep the same level of intrigue and fasination. You kept Sesshoumaru honest to his character. Don't allow him to change to quickly.

Random thought...Tenseiga is rather fickle with who it deems worthy to live, ne? It must have been InuYasha's time to die I guess. Kagome has the completed jewel  back. In theory, she should be sent home when the wish is made on the jewel. I can't wait to see how you develope this.   JEN

Hey, I relly liked this first chapter, can´t wait for the next one.  ;)

I really like it.

Great start, please update soon.