You wonderful writer, this is like candy to a starving diabetic, thank you, you made my day, a tearful thank you from a grateful fan...
Venita (Chapter 18) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
All seven chapters are great, cutes babies, please update soon.
Sessygurl (Chapter 18) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
The last line is too cute!!!
dianne (Chapter 18) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
yay twins! ^.^
dianne (Chapter 17) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
XD poor inuyasha, having to listen to all their naughtiness! XDD
lol Fantastic chapter!
Ichigo (Chapter 17) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
Charming story so far, you have some good potential. I look forward to reading more of this story and hope you don't plan to end it here.
Badda bing theheh perfect omg there going to have adorable childern awwwww let bring on some drama and action now lol
Sessygurl (Chapter 17) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
I thik this stroy is adorable, I cant wait to read more!!!!
dianne (Chapter 17) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
I just have one thing to say....... AWW!
XD
Eris (Chapter 16) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
I am looking forward to the next chapter. Love it!
terry (Chapter 15) - Sun 29 Jan 2012
Good story, a little mushy for Sesshomaru, I do not like the grammatical errors though like kitling in the sentence "He mumbled as he placed the kitling on her bed". The correct spelling is kitten.
Question: Is english your second language?
You need to ger a beta or edit your story. Better yet google spell/ grammar check, copy and paste your story into a program of your choice, then post your revised story.
Just a suggestion.
(P.S: all your mistakes will come up underlined or in bold)
dianne (Chapter 15) - Sun 29 Jan 2012
this was an amazing chapter!
I'm so glad I deciced to read this story ^.^
I feel so bad for both kags and sess...kouga needs to be beat for being such a dick!!!
amy (Chapter 14) - Sat 28 Jan 2012
Thank you for the new update, I want more updates now!
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