So far so good i like where this story going but there are tons of mistake that need to be corrected some of these sentances doesn't make any sense at all but i believe i know where you trying to go , so if you have the time please try fixing them , if not you can always ask for a beta reader ; I really like this story so please dont be discourage by my review i just want to help you at anyway i can , :3 .
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