A cute, sweet chapter. I hope to read the next chapter soon ♥
Hmm...I'll get right to the point: I think our mysterious Shinji Murasaki is really Sesshomaru. Kagome is doing all the talking and he's doing all the listening and positioning.
Love the story - the drawn out suspense is killing me in a long, drawn out way... ^.^
Can hardly wait for the next update!
love this chapter.
I love this chapter! I hope you can update soon <3
Christmastime is such a joy! To think that Kagome is going to tell Sesshomaru about Christmas! Kekekekekeek. Sesshy is very caring, is he not? Lol. Thank you for updating when you have such limited time to do so. I hope you and your family the best!
XD
RubyJeweler
MissKatt (Chapter 5) - Wed 18 Jan 2012
An absolutely adorable chapter. And don't worry about the updattoy user are busy and it cannot be helped. Your loyal readers will wait :) safe travels!
-MissKatt
I love it! Update soon and keep up the good work!
Yup. I have decided...that the flashback was great! It's really nice to read that Sesshomaru is really a caring individual inside. Yay! Thank you for abiding by our requests on the flashback. I enjoyed it a lot. ^^
I really like how you've developed the story so far. I'm excited to see what else happens.
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sun 01 Jan 2012
more!!:( lol i want to see what happens
Diane (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Jan 2012
I'm really enjoying this so far. Just as an FYI, the u goes after the s not before; causally, casually.
KAggie (Chapter 4) - Sun 01 Jan 2012
In a way, I appreciated that the story was sped up till the point of the blizzard. Sometimes, there can just be too many flashbacks that make me forget what's happening in the present. And I can't wait to see more interaction between both of them! It's gonna get interesting! :)
plkj (Chapter 4) - Sun 01 Jan 2012
You really don't need the interruptions- it makes the story sound more like a children's one, such as 'The Princess Bride.' Otherwise great story so far! Can wait to see who this guy is :)
meeee (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
flashback!
PFairy (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
I love this story! Great Job! Flashbacks would be great. I think reliving the memory would be better, more real, than a quick blurb in conversation about what happened. :)
Little Rin (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011
Flashback. Long naration can be annoying.
Ummm...I wouldn't mind reading a short flashback. ( ; Not too long as to bore me, but long enough to give us, the readers, a clear story. ;D
me (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011
i wouldn't mind full on flash backs like she is reliving them. great story!
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