Awww. Poor Sesshoumaru.
Great story! You write so well and so far, your plot is so very entertaining. I laughed imagining Kag being pulled by her hair like Sess was a caveman!
I'm guessing Sess is like that in your fic from losing Rin and though I don't doubt for a minute that he cared about her, I highly doubt he saw her as his 'pup'. He only ever provided protection and maybe a lesson or two. If he'd really seen her as his pup, wouldn't he have provided more, like food, shelter, shoes, etc? Rin was always foraging for food on her own. She also died a second time when in hell and though he was angry and even threw his Tenseiga in his ire, he did't show much sorrow. Plus he had no qualms in leaving her behind in Kaede's village. Sure he'd bring her Kimono but I think it was mainly because she's still his resposibility. Like in Pet Sematary, one should take care of what one brings back.
I bet you'd also have her be like everyone's made her in this site, a flower-obsessed child that speaks in 3rd person. I've never even once heard her speak like that in the anime or manga nor do I recall seeing her picking flowers all the time. Sess doesn't even speak in 3rd person as much as everyone has him do in their stories and it's not really the, "This Sesshoumaru..."either. I think I've only heard him say, "I, Sesshoumaru..." like two or three times in the whole story of InuYasha.
Anyway, I still think your story is great. Keep up the wonderful work and hope you update soon!
Wow! I sure feel sorry for Sesshomaru. He's so far gone into his grief...
It must be heartbreaking for him to remember the flowers, because Rin used to pick flowers. Thank you for the lovely updates, and sorry I couldn't review for every single chapter. My arms hurt from brainstorming and then writing over ten pages of rough drafts for my class final. TT.TT Such is the life of a college student.
Hoping to read more. ^^
Diane (Chapter 7) - Sat 10 Dec 2011
I'm enjoying this & am really looking forward to finding out what's going on & why. At least Sess isn't acting like my dog, when she got annoyed she'd wet the bed, thankfully she seems to forget about it for long periods in between wet the bed episodes lasting from 1 to 3 months.
Anon (Chapter 6) - Wed 07 Dec 2011
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I absolutely never review on stories here on Dokuga. (Though I do stalk it quite a bit)
I have to say, I've completely fallen in love with this story and I really really really really hope you update soon!
I really like it so far. Again, I love it.
I really can't wait to see what happens!
Thank you so much for writing this!
Sophie (Chapter 6) - Wed 07 Dec 2011
It's not a threat, no whinning, but I need moooore. Pretty please :)
pauly (Chapter 6) - Wed 07 Dec 2011
I totally love this story so far, there are so many things to discover here, it´s really interesting. Keep up the great work!!!!
Whoot! Update!! XD
Lovely chapter. I really like all the hints you put in there. Now I can't wait to read more and find out what happens! >__<
*whines at you* MORE!!! *lip wibbles* *is addicted*
Ohhhh...I am sooo loving this story. :) Thank you so much for continuing. I cannot wait to read more.
Memori (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Dec 2011
Oh man! That was so good! Can't wait for your next chapters because I'm very curious as to what happened to Sesshomaru and how Kagome is going to help fix it! Keep up the great work and thanks for updating so often!
Sophie (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Dec 2011
Thank God you're updating so often, because every time I'm left with want that there was already something more. Great story!
o.o *demands more* !!! rable rable rable!
Really liked it. thought it was going to be more like beauty and the beast so i kept waiting for signing pots and cups to come out and surprise us. but i was pleasantly surprised when they did not. keep up the good work and update soon. :)
Absolutely fantastic chapters!! I cannot wait to read more. Thank you for updating so quickly, I was so antsy to read more and it was amazing to find not one but two more chapters. Great! Please continue, you have just added another avid fan to this story. Will wait anxiously for more.
Awesome chapter.
Does Sesshoumaru ignore the fact that she is naked? His beast is in complete control right? So it would be similar to undressing infront of your dog, right? I love the little attraction scene between a sleeping Kagome and Beast Sesshoumaru.
Lillian (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Dec 2011
I'm really enjoying this! I thought you might want to know. I eagerly await your next update!
KT (Chapter 4) - Tue 06 Dec 2011
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