Thank you for updating so quickly. So loving this story. Please continue.
Alright, well I'm not really a frequent reviewer, but when I run across a story like this, a story that leaves me thinking about it even after I've read it--a story that gives me inspiration to write--I just have to stop and take a moment to show my appreciation.
That being said...I LOVE this story!
The way you write just leaves me wanting more, and your ability to drop little hints here and there is amazing! I love how you're deviating from the typical "Kagome and Sesshomaru meet in modern times" story, and how you're even doing something different than Disney's story, which is good, because your writing has such a unique flair that wouldn't be as potent if you were trying to stick to that plot.
Your characterizations are perfect, especially considering that you're switching from Kagome's point of view to Sesshomaru's beast's point of view...And honestly, no one has written Sesshmaru's beast like this before, and I doubt anyone will be able to do it as well as you have.
All in all, the only complaint I have about this marvelous work of art is the chapter length--sometimes I wish you would flesh out the scenes a little more, but I also understand that sometimes chapters just need to be short, so although the chapters are short, you're utilizing them wonderfully and building the suspense with each and every one.
Keep up the awesome work, and I'll be lurking, erm I mean waiting for the next chapter!
~Aubrey
Love it!!!!!!! Very interesting and a very unique idea. I simply adore your writing style <3
I like your story very much. I can't wait to read more.
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