A very hot chapter indeed! Again both characters were written very realistically and really like how you did Sesshoumaru's thoughts during the sex scene.
Oh very nicely done and Sango's advice seem very appropriate. And Kagome is so very m,uch like me in the fact sex or intimacy without love would be hard to enjoy or feel good about.
BTW... Just figured out that the review box doesn't have a built in spell checker so I'm apologizing for any misspelled words I may have or will have written in the past or future.
Wispr (Chapter 4) - Tue 19 Aug 2014
I really liked how you did Inuyasha's reaction to Kagome telling him what happen. It showed that he has mature, some, and also like his misgivings he was feeling over the issue at hand.
So far all the characters have been written really balanced and that makes for a far more enjoyable read.
Wispr (Chapter 3) - Tue 19 Aug 2014
I know I said was going to bed but just had to get one more chapter read... ;) Glad I did. Again how you are writing both Sesshoumaru and Kagome's actions are spot on and so much fun to read! Also like how very slowly Sesshoumaru is developing deeper feelings for Kagome.
Wispr (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Aug 2014
Just love how you wrote the convosations between Kagome and Sango and later with Miroku. Had everyone very in character. Kagome's worrires about Inuyasha's reaction to what happen were very realistically done.
Well I'm off to bed but don't worry gonna be coming back for more later tomorrow!
Thanks for writing and sharing such amazing stories!
Wispr (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Aug 2014
How you wrote Kagome's thoughts and misgivings really reflected her personality really well.
I loved this story, please write a sequel or something. I want more, it was awesome.
Congratulations!!!!!
*psssssssssst* sequel?
Sequel?
SEquel?
SEQuel?
SEQUEl?
SEQUEL?
PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEASE?
Ahh I can't believe it's over!! I loved the work you put into this story and how you always stayed with it. I'm so happy that I got to read it from beginning to end(more than once now) ^^ Thank you so much for providing this for us and it was effort well spent. Thanks so much!
Ariel (Chapter 31) - Thu 31 Jul 2014
Thank you for this awesome story! Hope to see more fics from you! X)
lmao only kagome would say yes, then ask about the hair!
Episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. This story was amazing and awesome, and it had a wonderful ending!
Lolz.Too funny:-D
If you missed Sailor Moon Crystal episode 2 you can watch it on youtube. Good chapter, I'm glad Kagome get to stay with Sesshomaru, hope there's a lemon in the last chapter! Keep it coming.
whoooo! i loved the 1st story and i'm never into sequels because they become watered down sometimes, but i can honestly say that this is my most favorite sequels ever...so far? 0.o anyways, i loved this story, ESPECIALLY any and all lemons (whew, those were NICE) but the plot itself was great. there weren't any huge flaws and everything flowed very nicely, especially wth you adding your own original twists to the whole story. can't wait to red the next chapter, although i am sad to see it end, but all great things must come to an end
Hopefully we can get a final big lemon before this ends :P
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