I have been reading this story as non stop as I could.....otherwise I'm sure I would have left a few more reviews, my apologies for not doing so.

I happen to love how you wrote this. It's an AU with close enough elements to the original story to make it a 'smooth transition'. Hard to find, and rather enjoyable. <3

The romance had a very nice pace. It wasn't something that smacked you in the face, or took forever to grow, and it plays a part in the story without drowning everything else out. Kudos.

As for the storytelling, You placed hints to things in the future and past as you went, and it was all easy enough to follow and not get lost in all the info. Making the whole story easier to get caught up in and not want to stop reading.  I'm looking forward to updates. Even if they are slow. I had a feeling this was just uploading already completed chapters, so I'm not surprised.

Thank you for posting this on Dokuga. <3

your story was truely remarkable all the way up to the last word you wrote in the last chapter. I applaud you for your wonderful way of writing your story so far and can't wait for the rest of it to come to life. I will be waiting patiently for the next part of your story to follow. thanks for the great work.

Inulover

Wait...you are leaving us at this junction?!  How evil of you, especially after raising our hopes with such speedy updates earlier in the week.  *laughs*

Again a great fight scene, nice way for inuyasha to have a love interest...can't wait for more

Awesome job!  Please keep it coming! 

WOW! You update fast! =] I like that!

I love your story!!!! I fell in love with it riight after reading the first chapter. It's adventurous, captures the

characters personalities perfectly, and is so WOW! I love how you have Sesshomaru and Kagome's relationship slowly but surely

developing!

Great job!!! XD =] ;)

Wow, three chapters! And that was a shocking revelation about our poor daiyoukai. Looking forward to see what other developments you have up your sleeve ;)

This has to be the most exciting and compelling story! I love how Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship is gradual and realistic, and not BAM, they instantly fall in love. Kagome's character is written perfectly as Sesshoumaru's character is written perfectly. Their personatilites are not changed or undermined. It so cute when Kagome and Sesshomaru bicker! I was about to cry when Sesshomaru is protecting Kagome. Finally, Sesshomaru realized his feelings for her. I wished Sesshomaru and Kagome could have been explored in the Inuyasha series. They are so similiar and different at the same time. Please update soon! Also, loved the interaction between Akira and Kagome. I hope there's more. I love it when Sesshomaru jealous! It would be fun to see Kagome jealous!

This story is beautifully written and captivating. I can't wait for your next update!

wow, i got addicted to this fic. I am loving every moment! Continue with the good work and update soon!

I love it!!! =] I hope to see more updates!!! =3

that was a great battle scene!!!

I love your story, It is 5:54am I should be asleep, but this was like a great book, I couldn't put it down until it was all gone! LOVE LOVE LOVE! Keep up the great worK!!

please pleae update

I love this story. I couldnt stop readying the chapters even thou i was tired. Love it. I can't wait until you update. :)

I'm enjoying reading this. 1 slight correction on the 2nd paragraph of chapter 14, it's rogue not rouge, rouge is another name for blush (make-up).

ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!!!! THIS STORY IS REALLY AMAZING, YOU'RE DOING A GREAT JOB!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!

Wow, I just found this little story and already I am blessed with an update :D  The slight comedic relief in the chapters is a nice touch with all the serious stuff. Like it ;)