I started this yesterday and finally finished all the chapters (that you have written so far) today. I can only say, this is very addicting; I was practically reading the whole day. The whole story is just spell-binding. I love it. Keep the great work up! :)
WAH!!! I'll have you know that I TOTALLY ignored all my other duties today - to the extent that I didn't even go out to the pharmacy for my daughter's meds - until I had finished your entire story to this point. I am so totally and completely HOOKED it's not even funny! WOW. What an epic you have here, m'dear, are you SURE this is your first story?? And you think you need a beta? Whoa. Srsly... just... whoa. Now, I am bereft. And pouting. I ate the whole thing in one day, darn it. And find myself wanting MOAR, terribly. Just like a greedy child. *sigh* I suppose I will have to wait as patiently as possible for you to update again, given the fact that my favorite authors have, like, LIVES and stuff. :( I'm still wondering how I could have missed this delicious story in the first place, but I have it now! And have dutifully faved it so that I'll know immediately when you update.
Still, my mind will whirl at what you may throw at us next. How will they handle Menomaru?? And the Shikon? And when the heck are we going to hear the patter of little feet??? How's Kags supposed to get her soul back? How's she gonna free her parents... and do they even know that she's holding them safe? Oh, so many questions!! And, again, I am abusing punctuation, sorry. Can't help it, though, when I run across a pearl this gorgeous. Thank you so VERY much for all the hard work you've put into this epic, and for sharing your brainchild with greedy word-sucking souls like me!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Miyukiyama (Chapter 38) - Sat 03 Mar 2012
This chapter update has made my day. And Sesshoumaru, you are CUTE! Get over it! Now how exactly do you plan to get rid of Menomara? I think everyone wants him to just disappear.
Venita (Chapter 38) - Sat 03 Mar 2012
I'm glad Kagome is done with the suitors, the last sence was so cute! Please update soon.
lashon (Chapter 38) - Sat 03 Mar 2012
this sesshomaru is not cute lol.. this chapter is cute
Another wonderful and long chapter. This story is so cute. I can't wait to read more!!!
(Chapter 37) - Sat 04 Feb 2012
I know I know I'm not supposed to review my own story, but I feel readers actually check out reviews before looking at an author's profile. Anyway, I just wanted to get it out there that I'm looking for a beta reader for this story. The details are in my profile. So if you're a beta, or know someone, spread the word. Check it out! Thanks, and keep reviewing!
~ Jess
Sesshomaru need to go kick some butt!
Venita (Chapter 37) - Fri 03 Feb 2012
Poor Kagome having to deal with sick males, please update soon.
How dishonorable of Menomaru! Shouldn't Kagome have the say instead of him forcing her? Stupid pathetic moth. Sesshomaru is soooo gonna kick his ass now. Hopefully. Lol. Hmm...makes for one heck of a story though. I love the tension and the drama. Keep rolling it in! ^^
Sounds like what they really need to do is free the trapped half of Kagome's soul. :sighs: I don't see them having the time to be able to DO that though, unless something just happens to set such a thing in motion. Maybe Sesshomaru is researching this while Kagome is subjected to the mating trials?
Thanks for writing.
Sala (Chapter 37) - Thu 02 Feb 2012
Poor Kagome. Never can catch a break...
dianne (Chapter 37) - Thu 02 Feb 2012
Agh poor kagome, having to deal with those stupid males!
I cant wait to see what happens next, update soon!
ilovesessh (Chapter 37) - Thu 02 Feb 2012
ahh don't stop there! go sesshy...what's he gonna do next? ahhhh
love it! this story seriously needs more reviews
Unfortunately I needed sleep and it took me two days but I read all 36 chapters. It's been awhile since I found a story that I literally had to be forced away from my computer and cellphone from in order to perform routine functions. =D I absolutely love this story and I am super excited for the next update. I wish I could put into words how much I adore this fanfiction. *sighs and skips away*
dianne (Chapter 36) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
I just found this story and I absolutly love it!
I cannot wait until the next chapter!
keep up the amazing work!
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