You spelt Dai-Youkai and Tai-Youkai wrong.

Other than that it was a good story.

i know im gonna enjoy it too...update?

Shibari anyone?  On him, she may be versitile in knots.  Release in restraint.

I like your story. Update soon!

I like it <3

OMG!U HAVE TO UPDATE! i like rly wamma know what happens next! >.<!

Well I must admit - it wasn't perfect. But don't worry you have time.

Here's my precious advice 4 u so that u can get better:

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! XD

At least 5 pages A4 MORE! ^^

Lol, gotcha. U rly believed I have sth against ur story! :3

I love where this story is going and I cant wait to read more *on the edge of seat*