I really hope you don't plan on abandoning this story, I love it so much and I hope you update soon.
You made a mistake in Chapter 4. Kagome is wearing a skirt when she sits down on the sofa, and yet, when they get into things, she is wearing pants. I almost missed it.
I love this story. I hope you continue it soon!
This story is so good, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Tuyen (Chapter 9) - Fri 17 May 2013
I am captivated by this story, loving it! Hope you will post another chapter again soon :)
s_spina (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 May 2013
arrgh
the drama is getting to much! Seriously Sesshoumaru,... just talk already in plain words so that she will understand (;_;)
Shaneka (Chapter 9) - Tue 05 Feb 2013
Love this story can't wait for it to be updated!!!
Oh shit oh shit oh shit..I loved the lemon in the chapters you described the scenarios so well I imagined I was Kagome. This is a interesting pickle they got themselves into and Sesshomaru needs to either come clean and freaking tell her how he feels and why he did what he did or Kagome needs to force it out of him. I have a feeling you are going to make us wait til Kagome has the baby before something gets said.
Thank you so much for this chapter, now I think I can survive until the next update.
Also, feel better!! <3
You tease!! Everything seemed to happen so fast and then, it stopped and my reaction was "NOOOO!!!" XD!
Wonderful chapter!! Absolutely amazing! I loved Sesshomaru's inner turmoil and how he was trying to voice what he wanted but it just didn't make sense to Kagome - I thought you were right on the dot with his character :)
This is my favourite story and I was SO happy to see such an early update :D!! I do hope the next one comes sooner ;)
Keep up the fabulous work!! You're doing an awesome job :)
P.S. Even though the story started out as PWP, the plot is what makes this story even better....and of course your steamy hot lemons >D
MidNigh (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Jan 2013
Yay another update! The fact that they keep misunderstanding each other is driving me crazy lol but I just can't stop reading!! Please update soon.
Szira (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Jan 2013
AH! Why you keep stopping! Please jut sit at your computer and type away till you're finished! I love this fic! I love ALL your fics! I love you! Omigawsh! And Kanna! What a refreshing change I'm kinda over inu/kikyo!
Aaaaaaaaaaaaargh! Dammit, Sesshoumaru! Get your shit together and just tell her already. Sheesh! Gonna spontaneusly combust if he can't just get it together and tell her already. Gawd. They can't even have a civilized conversation for more than five minutes before it turns into a screaming match and then GLORIUS SMUTTY GOODNESS. So OUT with it....and everyone will be happier!
Different note, GREAT chapter btw. Loving the development and I am actually quite happy you didn't have them make up and be happy in two chapters or less. Very believeable. Lovin it!!!! >.<
Can't wait for more!
--Silver
xDori (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Jan 2013
omggg lovely chapter!!! thanks for the update. it made my night :)
I just started to read this the other day and LOVED it. I just love your stories. thanks for wrighting.
Luna C. (Chapter 9) - Sun 20 Jan 2013
Omg they are both stubborn! It's frustrating but at the same time it's realistic and intriguing!
Can't wait for your next update and I hope you get well soon!
Keep it coming.
Ankita (Chapter 9) - Sun 20 Jan 2013
n i didnt find any mistakessss it was flawless i hope you get well soon
<3 love you author
p.s.- i'm the 1st one to comment
Ankita (Chapter 9) - Sun 20 Jan 2013
awesummmmm chapter <3 love it
please please update sooonnnnn
i'm dying hereeee
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