I am starting to worry about Kagome. So far she seems so..terrified of the idea of cheating on Inuyasha, the idiot husband who's been cheating on her this entire time. I want for her to just tell him and get rid of him so bad. But the path Sesshoumaru is taking them down, it seems he will end up taking her from under his brother's nose and then reveal it to him in the last second. Something that will probably break Kagome and have her crying and whatnot, then he'll have to reveal that her supposed best friend is the one who her husband's been cheating on her with. Omg, that's all I keep seeing happening in my head. The HUGE fallout from all of this.
I'm so enthralled by what is happening either way. I quite like Sesshoumaru's attitude in this story , this strong, forceful, take what he wants, give nothing back, attitude fits him. I will awaiting the next chapter [fav stories].
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Wow! That was an amazing first chapter! I immediately thought of Kanna when I saw the screen name, but you made me think I was wrong at first with her reactions to Inuyasha's cheating. But then you made me suspicious again with her not wanting Kagome to go home, and then turned around and made me and Kagome feel that it was for the best due to her not wanting Kagome to go home and breakdown in front of Inuyasha. Throughout the entire Kanna Kagome conversation, you made me suspicious and then soothed my fears before slapping me with the "I was right the first time" moment with Kanna's internal dialogue. It was wonderful.
THEN Kagome gets to the club and gets herself into an orgy lockdown. *smh* Ohhh the wonderful giddiness that set in at Sesshoumaru's rescue. Ohhh I had a feeling he wouldn't do anything with her, just keep her safe, but he got he's feel on!!!! It was wonderful. Then that damn infernal pride and honor of his and hers, got in the way and he got her out of the club before finishing the job. Ugh, I wanted to slap them both. However, I must say, it gives a great sense of their character and their feelings with just those actions. It also leaves me with a sense of longing, a longing to know what happens now and a longing to see them clawing at each other in reckless abandon while in the throes of sex. *shrugz* Hey, don't look at me funny, you're the one who put it in my head.
I have to say, I'm already in love after your first chapter. I'll be reading the rest now, so don't expect reviews ‘til I'm done. I prefer reading your story. Apologies.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Reader in Disguise (Chapter 3) - Sun 27 Nov 2011
That was damn hot! Haven't read something this good in a long time! Please update soon again.
That's too hot! I hope you update SOON!!
Eve Nighte (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Nov 2011
Finally!! xD It's about time Sesshomaru got some >D
Both lemons in the chapter were skillfully written - at one point, I wa holding my own breath because I didn't want people to hear me breath XD!! If having raw sex right next door to Inuyasha wasn't thrilling enough, I can only imagine what Sesshomaru has planned for our innocent little Kagome >D Muahahahaha
Keep up the awesome job :)
P.S. This is currently my favourite story so I look forward to each and every update :) Plus, I love the how the plot goes so perfectly with the story (even though it's semi-PWP >D)! Also, I think this story deserves 1st Place for Best Lemon at the Dokuga Awards ;)
Koi (Chapter 3) - Sat 26 Nov 2011
What an arousing chapter! Kagome is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooo lucky! What i wouldn't give to be in Kagome's spot =D.
I also wonder if Kagome and sesshomaru will either get caught or if kagome will just tell inuyasha that she doesn't love him anymore. That will be an interesting chapter...But i really hope for inuyasha to get caught with kagome's backstabbing, no good, slut ass faced, fake ass friend... Kanna :). What an interesting chapter that would be. :D Can't wait for the next chapter!
Luna (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Nov 2011
Woman. You have GOT to finish this!! I was browsing through affnet and found this story, then I came over here HOPING that maybe there was a slight chance that more was posted over here... BUT THERE WASNT! I NEED MORE!!! lol So... update soon? Please?
Man, I hope Kagome gets the balls to tell InuYasha off and leave his cheating ass. It would free her up for Sesshomaru to come in and do more smutty things to her without her concious in the way. And he could finally get some! But I do hope that Kagome learns that is was Kanna, who is the mistriss. Maybe she would walk in on them unexpectedly...at Kanna's apartment. I don't know, you're the writer. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Koi (Chapter 1) - Sun 09 Oct 2011
All i can say is.......YYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
Koi (Chapter 1) - Sun 09 Oct 2011
<Gasps in shock> Omg What a good 2nd chapter! Wow! I can't wait until the 3rd chapter comes out! I want MOOOORE soo badly! What a perfect day today! First this story and then my favorite football team (The New England Patriots) beat their rival team(the Jets)!!!
Omgggggg so sexxxyyyy D: WANT MOAR.
Go Sesshomaru! I like the way it's more strategic that he's taking advantage of the situation than other reasons. That, and it being the case that the reason he Wants to is because he is attracted to Kagome.
Thanks for writing.
80 this tied with my love for firangi.....
THIS makes me all 0o0o0o0o0o0o0o and kanna's a twat, i really REALLY hope that she gets what's comming to her, maybe sess can arrange for her to be given to naraku! >_> who could be an old devilish friend, and inuyasha she get stuck with sango who's abusive!
Eve Nighte (Chapter 2) - Sat 08 Oct 2011
This is a response to kuro's review:
Honestly, did you expect everything to be solved in one chapter? Did you expect everything to be 'happy-go-lucky'? The author classified the story as "Angst, Drama, Erotica, Kink, Romance" so OBVIOUSLY there'll be some moments of misery, doubt, pain and hurt. Also, each author has the ability to change the character of Kagome to fit their original story.
I understand you don't like this type of character and it's great that you're voicing your opinion but you have to understand that the character of Kagome does not all of the information and that Kanna (her so-called best friend is a lying, husband-stealing bitch) is manipulating her into thinking that everything is 'ok' and she will have Kagome's back no matter what.
I hope this clears the air and maybe next time, try to enjoy the story :)
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