Reviews for Clumsy by forthright

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KShadeslady (Chapter 63) - Sun 29 Oct 2017

OMG! Our boy needs to man up. He is rather cute though. 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 67) - Sat 28 Oct 2017

Oh, LOL, this should be fun!


KShadeslady (Chapter 62) - Sat 28 Oct 2017

Sweet...did she just acknowledge him as alpha? 


KShadeslady (Chapter 59) - Sat 28 Oct 2017

Yah!! It’s Rin! The gang is nearly all here. 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 64) - Fri 27 Oct 2017

Yay! Rin!


typicalyssa (Chapter 64) - Thu 26 Oct 2017

Oh, naughty Sesshoume! Haha.. 


typicalyssa (Chapter 63) - Thu 26 Oct 2017

LOLLLLL!!! Why did you say that, Kagomaru?! *face palm*


typicalyssa (Chapter 62) - Thu 26 Oct 2017

Aww.. Kagomaru must be filled with pride at this moment. I'm surprised Sesshoume willingly acknowledges him as the Alpha. 


typicalyssa (Chapter 61) - Thu 26 Oct 2017

Hahaha.. Bet Kagomaru didn't expect to be tackled. XD 


KShadeslady (Chapter 57) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

I’m all caught up. And this is becoming very tangled indeed. You have done a wonderful job with this. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 53) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

I get the feeling that Father has been busy. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 46) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

I’m waiting for him to put his foot in it soon. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 40) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

LOL! Must be Miroku. About to die too from the sounds of it. Put his hand on the wrong bottom. I can understand how chained she must be feeling. Sorry I haven’t reviewed more. I love how this is going along. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 19) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Dad is laying down the law...


KShadeslady (Chapter 18) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Oops! This is so much fun. You’ve caught both their characters but each has been changed, just a little. This is fun! Father is VERY imposing. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 11) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

LOL do it now or he’s going to haunt your dreams. Sweet! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Okay, I wasn’t sure I was going to like this one but you have enchanted me and I love this. 


typicalyssa (Chapter 57) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Wow. Didn't expect Sesshoume to be kind enough to take Izayoi in. Guess she's more thoughtful as a lady? 


typicalyssa (Chapter 51) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Haha.. Poor Kagomaru, getting tempted every morning. 


typicalyssa (Chapter 49) - Wed 25 Oct 2017

Ahhh! Their first kiss? 


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