Pkease Update!!! This is a great story I would like to find out what happen next does she win and what about the big guy fluffy-sama.
The story is very good and well written, except it's very confusing with the skip to the future and back and so many characters that you keep forgetting who they are! I get it that you want to keep the secrets and make it mysterious but since this is an automatically the new characters are hard to keep track of. I don't mean to be rude i get how important it is but it's too little detailed and the jumps around are too confusing! I keep thinking who is this? What did he do? Ionly got that future Ivan is her son but is he natural is it ryo? No clue and I get that it's again a secret but too many questions are hard to follow and stir the concentration in other part. I personally like the flashbacks included as memories not one chapter future one chapter last, I lose the track of them and forgot what happened! In both timelines!
In rest the idea is very amazing! Kagome is badass and just super! I of course don't like her pain at Rins episode, but I hope it gets resolved soon! What is a fic without some drama? Your fighting scenes are superb, I envy you with white envy! I can't write like this! I am glad I found this gem! I was looking for something to read at the weekend to relax and surprise found this! What a pleasant read! Thx for posting! I wish you good luck with your writing! Hopefully you will find time and inspiration to update soon! Thx! Take care!
Eve (Chapter 51) - Thu 12 Mar 2015
I had lost track of this story, I'm so happy to have found it again!
Amazing story that I had to read it from the beginning again!
Keep them coming! I greatly look forward to the next chapter!
Love it!
Maya Angelou passed away, cool chapter and Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
mari (Chapter 51) - Sun 08 Jun 2014
awesome thanks for the update.
mari (Chapter 50) - Wed 19 Mar 2014
awesome update thanks.
So close, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
Haven (Chapter 22) - Thu 13 Feb 2014
I just started reading this fic and I'm sooo glad that I did. This is really good. In earlier chapters, Rin's role is a bit different for which I'm glad. I don't mind her as the ever faithful ward in most stories, but this other side of Rin is refreshing, as is Shippo not being Kagome's "son." The back and forth between tandem feudal/modern settings make it a little confusing but I get it for the most part...I think. Anyway, very interesting and I'm eager to continue reading. This is quite an epic tale. Wahoo!
I'm so glad to see you updated the story! Someone needs to wake Inuyasha up sp he can tell them what transpired, but they need to find Kagome and someone needs to find poor Ryuu. Please update soon.
mari (Chapter 49) - Sat 01 Feb 2014
thank you for another great update.
Eve (Chapter 48) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
Oh yay new chapter!!!
oh so love this story!
please update soon again! This is one of my most favorite ones!
Nice, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
mari (Chapter 48) - Mon 27 Jan 2014
thank you so much for the update as always loved it.
Cinno (Chapter 47) - Sat 25 Jan 2014
Amazing please update
Late but like it. Keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 47) - Fri 27 Sep 2013
thank you for the updare loved it .
please keep updateing this beautiful story i so can't wait to read more of it
I thought you had given up on this story, I'm glad to see that is not the case here at all. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter very much, even though I may need to go back a couple chapters to remember what is exactly going on, but non-theless I was able to remember a little bit of the story. So I hope you update soon, I cant wait to see what happens in the void Kagome and everybody is in.
Thank you for the new chapter, it was great. Keep it coming.
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