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Kar (Chapter 23) - Tue 18 Oct 2011

fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! did she miss. O. M. GOSHHHHHHH!!!~!!!!!!!!! I NEED A NEW UPDATE AND VERY SOON OR I WILL KEEL OVER!!!!! AHGGHHGGGGHGHHHH!!!! WOMEN, YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, PLEASE!!!!!!!

LOL till then

KAR


Kar (Chapter 22) - Mon 17 Oct 2011

Damn, jinya is a true bastard, i love this story and cant wait for the next chapter' till then

KAR


0_o (Chapter 22) - Sun 16 Oct 2011

GOD I HATE JINYA AND KAGOMES MOTHER!!!!! ERKS!!!!! I wait a week for this to come out im such a loser and everytime i do I cry!!! something has to happen something good!!!  Sesshomaru you gotta help her!


Arya (Chapter 22) - Sun 16 Oct 2011

Thanks so much for such a interesting story! It has just the right balance. Keep up the good work :D


Kar (Chapter 21) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

damn, no other words for it, i was getting excited and everything and then out of no where when i think all is good and great, that ....mean guy... have to say it nicely you know fake sweatness in voice and all, comes and messes it all up... i love your story and i cant wait for the next chapter so till then

KAR


FantomuAiShi (Chapter 21) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

Oh, my...This story have been going great-albeit a bit sad and heart-wrenching. I'll think I'll start with all of the characters you have since showed.

 

I simply don't like Taishou-at least as his role as a father and a supposed role model, everything else...Well, I pitied him-perhaps he himself did not what it take to be a father or just simply desire the wealth and fame? Same goes for Kagome's supposed 'parents'. I love how you either induced hatred for them for their actions or pities because they cannot be a mother and a father to Kagome, when she needed them the most. You left me unsure of what to pick. Her mother though...I don't really know the full story so I'll keep my opinions of her to myself this time.

 

I...feel sorry for Souta-all he want was his sister and when she got kidnapped with a chance of death, it was heart-wrenching to see him to break down.

 

Kagura-I'm quite unsure of what to feel about her, maybe pity or just plain neutral. She definitely want to follow her dreams-but she had to choose between that and Rin-apparently she chose her dream. Many people will be angry about that since mothers are supposed to give up everything necessary for their children to ensure their health and their happiness (that's the gist of it, of course-so please pardon my lame attempt at explaining it off), but in a way, I'm glad for her. Not many will be willingly to make a hard choice...It's certainly hard for me to say why though. But in head sight, Kagura is a good character and I liked her.

 

Of course I'm a bit glad that she didn't really do as Taishou 'asked' her to do. Somehow, I seemed to think that she already knew that Sesshoumaru was in love with someone else but I can't say-I'll know more as the story come along.

 

Aw, poor Rin-she's a lovable child-in a way, her father, Sesshoumaru, had to make a choice...I can only hope that she still have a father.

 

Ugh, Naraku-I felt mixture of hatred and pity for that madman. He was angry because of Kagome's mother basically cheated him out of a child she supposedly have killed and basically took it out on both Kikyou and Kagome...:(

 

A madman is a madman but wouldn't be a madman without a reason, I supposed.

 

It seemed that Kagome's mother is a trigger of the whole thing and I'm guessing I'd be right.

 

Anyway...I simply love your story and I'd go and ramble about the happening of the story, but I think my pov of the characters will cover it. I surely hope that you wouldn't mind. ^^; Poor, poor Kagome and Sesshoumaru-all of those choices...*sighs sadly* You left me wishing that they will make it out together-and I sincerely hope that they will. Kagome and Sesshoumaru deserve some bits of happiness. Real happiness.

 

For sure, I'll be coming back and read some more! Keep up wonderful, beautiful work! ♥ And please forgive me for the long length of the review-I hope you'll be okay with that. ^^;

 

Sincerely,
~FantomuAiShi


Rai (Chapter 21) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

What a CLIFF HANGER!!!! It so intense! Please update soon...and MORE! XD


Miyukiyama (Chapter 21) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

I stopped studying for Economics; that's how AWESOME your story is. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!


The Talentless Hack (Chapter 21) - Tue 11 Oct 2011

I just woke up the rest of the house--and set the dog to barking--by yelling a VERY filthy word, lol.

I've been bad, and for the past 20 chapters I've been lurking, but I decided to woman up and de-lurk.  This story keeps me on pins and needles, waiting for the next update.  I've also been resisting the urge to try and predict what'll happen next (consciously, anyway), so I can be surprised (is that crazy, lol?).

Basically, what I'm saying is, this story is amazing and you're killing me...but that's okay, 'cause I like it!  :D

I eagerly anticipate the next chapter.

 

Best Regards,

The Hack


Tiegrsi (Chapter 21) - Mon 10 Oct 2011

Aaaaaaaahhhhhrrrrr!!!! Please update again soon! OMG what a cliffie! Please please please another chapter?

 


Kar (Chapter 20) - Mon 10 Oct 2011

believe me when i say i called out in pain for kagome and i cringed too, that was a very... well written chapter... no words can express the emotions you have somehow managed to protray in it. simply beautiful. till next time,

KAR


Rai (Chapter 19) - Sun 09 Oct 2011

This is friggin' great! Can't wait for the next update! Please let Sesshomaru find Kagome the soonest possible time! :D


Blaire (Chapter 19) - Sat 08 Oct 2011

Ok you need to update this story...yesterday. Please do it soon, I'm addicted!


KitElizaKing (Chapter 19) - Sat 08 Oct 2011

Awesome!  Another great chapter.  I always get so excited when I see this story has been updated.  It's got everything that makes it a classic.  Great plot, tension, sadness, affection and betrayal.  You're writing a story that can be read years from now and still appreciated.  Thanks for updating so quickly and making all of your fans so happy.  I really enjoy reading this.


Tiegrsi (Chapter 19) - Fri 07 Oct 2011

more more more please!! OMG it's getting good!!


Kar (Chapter 18) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

weellllllll i lwould love to see this story completed because, i actaully for the first time ever stayed up all night to read it all the way until i had to go to school and a take a test and when i came home i finsihed reading it and i find my self dissapointed because its not done :'( , but i wont cry because for one it makes me look stupid crying over my laptop and having my mother look at me like im some kind of crazy retard, so i will try and wait patiently for the next chapter. i do wonder how sesshomaru will ever find naraku and kagome... hmmm...

till next time

KAR


Rai (Chapter 18) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

OMG! This is getting exciting! Update soon please! XD


Rai (Chapter 17) - Wed 05 Oct 2011

THIS CHAPTER IS MIND BLOWING! I love the exchange of words between the two. And how Sesshoumaru rememered Kagome's life (growing up without her parents) touched me deeply. Reading your update eased out the stress that I'm currently feeling. Update soon again, ne?


KitElizaKing (Chapter 17) - Sun 02 Oct 2011

I love this story.  It's so well-written and suspenseful.  Damn Sesshomaru's father for interfering in his life and thinking he can plan all of it.  And damn Sesshomaru for letting him get away with it.  Guy needs to get a set.  With his intelligence and drive there's nothing he can't acheive for himself if he got out from under his father--even with Rin to support.  No one would turn down a chance to hire him with his grades and work experience.  He'd be like the uber-employee.  And what's going on with Kagome--crap!  I did not expect that her kidnapper would alse be her birth father!  Naraku, even.  That's like a kick to the stomach, that is.  I always look foward to seeing this story listed in the updates, because I know I'm going to get a great read, and be drawn back into this great story.  Thanks for keeping it going.


Rai (Chapter 16) - Sat 24 Sep 2011

What the?! I can't believe Kagura would do that the soonest possible time! But, then again, I know that she will. And unfortunately, the chapter breaks down and I can't read the next sequence! Update soon again please! Love. Love. Love.


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