...I don't think I have words for just how awful that was. Tonelessly stated, artlessly composed, void of plot....no, I don't possess the vocabulary necessary to describe how painfully atrocious this 'story' was. Truly, even with the morbid curiosity of wondering just how bad it could possibly get I could not force myself to read its entirety. 

Sorry, I meant "aware" for that second "are".

You are are that the fundoshi is a tpe of underwear, right? I think you mean hakama instead of fundoshi. otherwise, everyone's walking around pantless in their underwear.

Great Yaoi! Never would have thought someone would write out the actual mating, but it was good.