omg this story is amazing!!! the storyline, the characters, you just have a way with writing!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!! please update soon!
I want Kagome to find out what he has to go through with Meiling. To me, that could be considered almost like being raped since he really doesn't want to be with her. I just want Kagome to know and understand and not hold it against him, but feel outraged for him. I'd like for her to find some way to put a stop to him having to let Meiling force herself on him. I would love for Meiling to have her smug smile wiped clear away by a very painful physical way. What a catfight that would be between her and Kagome, with Kagome singing her good with her reiki and being the ultimate victor. I, also, hope that somehow this helps her to see he wants her and she decides to take a chance on him.
I did not like the fact that she had to get drunk to let him mark her up. To me, that was an insult to him. I hope she suffers from the mother of all hangovers as punishment.
Giannix (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Aug 2011
OMG!! i love your fic !!!! .. i wonder what will happen between those two :O... update soon!
I am irrevocably, totally and completely, undoubtedly, unconditionally, and undeniably in love with this story. I am enraptured with the plot, your characterization of my most favorite unlikely couple, and your writing and just everything about this. everythinggg. I was supposed to be getting a head start on work this morning, but I couldn't start until I had read every word of this so far (and then reread my favorite parts of course hahaha!) I regret nothing, it was totally worth it. :) I have always loved your writing since I discovered your stories on FF.net, and you have no idea the pitch of the girlish squeal I made when I saw your pen name pop up on Dokuga. <3 I am hooked and waiting for the next chapter! I love the warm moments between Kagome and Sesshomaru. They can be genuine with each other in a way that Sesshomau is starting to realize he enjoys far more than he wants to admit, and Kagome also has to rethink her previous misconceptions about his personality. It's just so perfect and genuine and adorable and I can't wait to read more!
Smortz (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Aug 2011
“I just wanted to tell you that you are a very big boy!” <---- I have a feeling that she is going to say this when she comes in contact with another area of Sesshomaru's body. >_> Ugh, I can see his reaction now. "Just wait, it gets bigger." MWUAHAHAHAHAHA
I love your writing, and this story only draws me in like a moth to light. I can't wait for the next installment!!!
~Smo
Its hilarious and entertaining! I love it!
Blaire (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Aug 2011
Wow. The way you make these two characters interacte is truly wonderful and brilliant. Let us not forget your orignial characters whom personalities are quite diverse. :) I am very interested to see where excatly you plan on taking this story, whether it is Kagome going home to her time and Sesshomaru meeting up with her there to "be with her" properly or the pair turn the politics in the feudal era completely upside down. Either way I look forward to the next chapter and hope it is soon.
Avidreader (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Aug 2011
That was well worth the wait and the read. Maybe Kagome shouldn't have said anything about something bad happening to him when she was angry with him...yeah karma is a b***h. I sure hate it for him though. I really like this story and am looking forward to the next chapter being posted. ...and keep up the rebellion. It suits you.
Mina-san (Chapter 4) - Sat 13 Aug 2011
Thank You Aura Depths you just made my day at work a lot more palatable I will laughing all day! I can't wait to read the next installment for this story! Again thank you very much.
Mina-san
Fantastic new chapter! And with so much story! Delightful thirty-eight pages!
I'm loving to see Sess slowly falling for her, even admiting he's maybe lying to himself! *laughs* And the sleeping together scene was simply adorable! I'm jealous.
I had fun with their "contrasting day". Karma is indeed a bitch! *laughs again* And the drunk scene... I'd love to know Sess toughts on that.
=D
Thanks for the new chapter! Great work!
SO... this was the bestest chapter ever.
When I was scrolling odwn I was literally thinking "No! No! Don't end there! You can't end now.." And then I refreshed the page and tada! More story! I wish I could do that with everything lol
Mentioning that Inuyasha would never be entered in the bloodline was upsetting (in a good way) I thought it was a nice touch.
When she's first getting dressed in the kimono, and he kicked the box perfectly at her, I giggled. No one had the right to be that cool. Haha, awesome.
The change up between her blissful day and his awful required rutting time was a great change of pace and hilarious.
Sesshoumaru sleeping; even I was lulled. His progression down into it was great, and the subconscious movements he hade to keep her close was great. Made me want to cuddle my bf lol.
Gore-tastic=Brilliant
I love how attached he's becoming to her, especially the cuddling.
So, yes, amazing chapter. I look forward to more updates!!! Your writing flows very nicely, no joke is ever played out, the timing is great, and the story is awesome!
fatcatmom (Chapter 3) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
WOW! Well written, riviting, fascinating psychodrama. Can't wait for Kagome to meet Meiling--they seem to have a lot in common.Please update at your earliest convenience. You have a new fan of your work! Thanks!
kissthehentai (Chapter 3) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
Oh man oh my. I am sure getting hot from this story!! Love it so much and I await in breathless anticipation for the next installment. Seriously. It's like my guilty pleasure next to True Blood. Please review as soon as possible!!
Wow, this is a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder how well Kagome will handle finally meeting Sesshoumaru's intended mate and the other hopefuls. They will certainly not be going easy on her.
Smortz (Chapter 3) - Tue 02 Aug 2011
You are my hero - my savior! I just got home from the doctor and saw you updated. T_T Dreams come true!!!!
Oh, and how you gave me such a delightfully great make out scene, even inserted some humping. Amazing!!!
^_^ Can't wait for the next installment!
TO INFINITY AND BEYOND!
~Smo
Ow, poor doggy! Raped by evil bitches! A guy like him must hate having to submit...
What exactly he has to do to get Meiling in heat? And if she goes in heat, he'll be forced to mate her? Or he still will have a choice?
I loved when he lost control with Kags! *hehehe* But he got learn to be gentle to not hurt her again!
=D
Awesome chapter! This is one of the best fics I'm reading now...
janjan (Chapter 3) - Mon 01 Aug 2011
is it too long? Nooo!!! i prefer my chapters longer rather than shorter but thats just my preference!
i love your take on kagome and sesshoumaru almost perfect! i can actually visualize exactly what you are writing! keep going cant wait for next update! its soo freeken cute!
Sala (Chapter 3) - Mon 01 Aug 2011
very nice!
of course the update wasnt too long! love it, cant wait for more!
Midnight Sun (Chapter 3) - Mon 01 Aug 2011
Yes thank you so much and as before you did an amazing job!!!!!!!!1 Now is when things get interesting lol Are we gonna see Sess. possesive side??? Because I love him like that lol
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