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j (Chapter 6) - Thu 21 Sep 2017

I hope that you have not given up on this story it is wonderful and so very interesting and I hope to see an update sometime it would definitely be a waste not to finish this great story


Monica (Chapter 6) - Sun 22 Jun 2014

Probably one of my all time favourite stories... I wish you would update! Your ability to weave such a story together is incredible. 


starwindess (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 May 2014

Just re-read your story again! And just like many times before, love it so very much!  I do hope to see an update soon! That would be wonderful.  I am so curious about what will happen next!!!


Loren (Chapter 6) - Thu 23 Jan 2014

Every chapter you post is a masterpeice. I adore this fanfic.. Please do update soon!

It's been quite some time :(


Kaitlyn (Chapter 6) - Sun 20 Oct 2013

Oh dear lord. 

You have no idea how disappointing it was to read through this in one sitting and then scroll to the bottom of the chapter and discover THERE IS NO MORE. 

Seriously. So disappointed that I created an account just to write a review - and I almost never review (which is awful of me, I should let authors know I appreciate their work more often!)

But anyway, this story is fantastic, seriously. It's one of those rare gems of fan fiction that has well-developed characters, few, if any, plot holes (I'm pretty sure there was one I caught, but I forgot about it now so it wasn't off-putting at all), and is altogether refreshing, amusing, endearing, and *believable.* 

So, I humbly implore you to please update this soon. I do realize that each of these chapters is a small monstrosity that likely takes an incredible amount of time to write, and I appreciate the hours you've taken to give us such a great read. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jul 2013

Love the story, it been a year and month since you update. Please update a new chapter soon, keep it coming.


Aynde (Chapter 1) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

Hi, I'm particularly amused with this, and enjoy the bit about the ears so far, because of the 'no removal' ideal in the Japanese culture, which shys away from things like ear piercings and surgery. I have no idea if you'll go further with this (or if you knew that? or know it better than I?) but I just went HAHAHA for that bit.


s_spina (Chapter 6) - Sat 11 May 2013

Ahhhrg

I think my mind got short circuited... 

 

Love the story, but the intensity and problems coming have me in a tizzy! Lovely, beautiful story!

 

pleasssse pleaseee update soon, ne?


Ankita (Chapter 6) - Fri 08 Mar 2013

please updateeee soonnn

 

pleaseeeeeeee


xDori (Chapter 6) - Sat 16 Feb 2013

OMG. i stayed up the whole night reading this fic... every chapter i read was riveting!! i absolutely adore everything about this story; the plot, the feelings, the humor, the drama, the descriptiveness, the spelling, grammar, punctuations, etc...just everything!! i do hope you continue and update soon! may writer's block be over for you soon! i am anxiously dying to read the battle between meiling and kagome. thanks for writing a great story!


Cathyrin (Chapter 6) - Fri 15 Feb 2013

Will this be continued?


Luna C. (Chapter 6) - Sun 20 Jan 2013

Omg this is an amazing story! I hope you update soon! :)


wiiTneSs (Chapter 6) - Sat 12 Jan 2013

Amazing story. I love how you protrayed both Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I hope Kagome power up soon!


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 1) - Tue 01 Jan 2013

Please update :(

Happy new year!


Ashley (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Nov 2012

Please Please PLEASE...update soon


zandria (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Aug 2012

please update again soon


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 6) - Tue 12 Jun 2012

Well, first of all... I'm so glad you updated. It had been soooooo long since I first read this story that I had to re-read the first 5 chapters which took me 2 days and then I read your last update and it took me another 2 days because it was SO long (THANK YOU!) and I really wanted to focus on every detail of Ch6.

Now, I'm guessing that since I read the first five chapters first and then your latest hit all continuously, I noticed how different Sesshoumaru's personality is now. I don't like him much to be honest. Chapter 6 had its moments of fun but the fun was almost nothing compared to the first five chapters which had me smiling all through the reading. I'm not saying it's bad or anything, but your writing really turned into a different direction.

I remember when I first started reading it, I was like Woah, yes! Something fun and light for the mind. I needed a break from reality and all my crap. but when I finished reading this last bit of the story, I was truly upset. Not that I didn't want MORE or that I wasn't hooked and thrilled with everything that was going on, but the main events and the plot thickened so damn much that it was hard to digest for a second.

Maybe you took the comments on Sessh being off-character a little too serious... I liked him better before. Being someone with feelings around Kagome (and giving her a hard time which makes us laugh at her expense) and being his normal self around others is way better than being so dry all the time to absolutely everyone -- in my opinion...

Anyway, perhaps I've exaggerated a little... but I couldn't help resenting you just a little bit for making it so angsty when before it was all laughter and bunnies.

I truly hope you update soon. I'm astounded with all the effort and time you put on this. I really congratulate you for a tremendously nice story and very nice way of writing.

 

xoxo

 

PS. I know the genre of the story has the word angst check-marked, but I was hoping you could look into what I'm saying and notice the difference between the light drama and seriousness of your former chapters and the kill-me-now/Oh-My-God/wtf-O_O mood of your latest update.

Second PS. Please, don't take my review badly... Honest to God, your writing is amazing. I'm not trying to flame you.

 


Mitsu (Chapter 6) - Thu 07 Jun 2012

Kagome certainly is resilient and commendable for being able to keep her head in all of this. It would irritate me to no end to be dragged into a situation in which I have little to no control, it speaks to the honorable character you've developed with her. Wonderful story, looking forward to rest and best wishes with your stories. 


thelittlegerman (Chapter 6) - Wed 06 Jun 2012

hey there! i really do love this chapter (probably for all the nakedness ;) ) and sheng is amazing! i loved the drinking game! and what the heck is up with those dogs? things get more and more complicated... you have to tell me though, how long is this chapter? i dont know why, but i needed almost 4 hours to get done with it. of course i took some breaks, but i was kind of mortified when i just looked at my clock. well, i was tired,too. so thats proably why. anyways- i cant wait for the next update, which will hopefully be soon! until then!


Lily Noir (Chapter 6) - Wed 06 Jun 2012

My, my, look who's shown up. Been gone for quite a long time there, haven't you ;) I'm glad to see you back though, and with a treat! That was a humongeus little thing I had to read there, no? And well worth the 8h spent staring into the screen to get through it (did I tell you I like long chapters... no? Well I do, a lot. Nearly lost my voice squealing from joy when I saw how...big... it was)

There were some angsty moments there for me, like the last part with Sessh being - cold?- to her, his refusal to accept his feelings, Meiling (srsly?! put him in her bed to imprint on her? Maybe she'll force him to sleep with her and get her in heat - I have such an angsty feeling about that.. poor Kags), then Kaggie possibly getting pregnant(and the fight being postponed or sth), the freaking fight, Sesshmom, Kag thinking about 'betraying' him... and a lot of other damn things.... Damn, your writing sure knows how to rile me up(not in the angry kind of way).

...And then there's the smutt...

.. and the lovely girl time... (do you know how well you portray Sango?)

.. and Sheng <3<3<3<3<3...

Maybe our lovely Shang figured out she was sth other than a miko (his reaction on Sessh 'sealing' her)... he could figure out the same thing as Hisa, wouldn't surprise me =)

And I thin

kthe tidbit about youkai having problems with joint dislocations is gonna be relevant to the fight (if it happens... I'm torn on it happening 50/50... dunno why though - a possible pregnancy interfering?.... there is no way to predict things in your stories, so I try  not to - and fail)

Looking forward to the next installment.... and pretty sure I'll angst over that one too X)))))

~lily


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