OMG!!! i couldnt stop reading it!! even when i saw it was late i couldnt stop reading it :O.. I loooove sesshoumaru's reaction :o :o... please update soon! what will happen between those two?

It's getting epic!

I really love how you develop your story, especially the use of contrast you put inside: Kagome's pampered day vs. Sesshomaru's rough encounter with Meiling, the imposing rules on the lord's life vs an easy-going titleless life, the bitches' behaviour vs Kagome's care and so on.

It's really thrilling to see the gradual changes inside Sesshomaru's head towards his so called lover, getting warmer and more affectionate as the "thryst" developes, and the sleeping - cuddling scene is really wonderful!

Needless to write, I AM waiting for an update :)

I am absolutely in love with your story and so glad that you write generous chapters. You have a gift for detail and characterization. The picture you paint of court life is realistic wonderful and humorous. The way you portray the situation between Sesshomaru and his fiancé is refreshing because it is rare to see Sesshomaru virtually powerless in such a scenario with out him being very out of character. I can not wait until the next chapter.

What I would give to get kissed as punishment from a guy like Sesshoumaru...This story just keeps getting better and better 

I'm going to admit I had a mix of thoughts over this chapter.

I'm not sure I can wrap my mind around Sesshoumaru submitting to a female like that.....or that any custom would leave so few options to an Alpha....but for now I'll try to believe around it.

I do however really like Your OC Head of servants. She's got the right kind of intuition and personality to make the story more interesting, and help lead the story both subtly and within reason.

As for Kagome in this chapter, I rather liked what happened to her, and with/for her. I'm glad she's adapting so well. XP

I do like how Sesshoumaru is slowly adjusting to wanting to keep Kagome. Noticing the differences with her and the others. Wanting and needing to be near Kagome for an unknown reason, seeking her out for comfort. It warmed me on the inside. Now we just need Kagome to see him as a real option for herself. <3

Hallo again,

it has been worth every minute of waiting !  First I thought of his mother "What a bitch" =),

of course she is a dam (hey I learned a new word), but not damned (even she should be for

her behaviour) ;-). On the other hand isn't sire reserverd only for males? I nearly had pity on

Sessh?maru (remember it is Sessh?maru .. die human....) to have such a nice family.

Really I enjoy the story very much and I would like to be pampered too!

Stardust

Oh, I'm getting more and more annoyed by those bitches, and Sessh is falling in loooove XD. I wonder if Kagome is stronger in body because she learned some martial arts. And Meiling is underhanded and spiteful, though, I can understand it a little since Kagome practically ousted her from Sessh (and Go Kagome! for that), and the other ones, soo full of themselves. No wonder Inu no Taisho sought respite in a human woman.

I'd really like to know how Kagome will get him solely for herself, and how they'll 'convince' others. And, will Sheng (I think) make an appearance in this fic (I really like him ;P)?

Lovely chapter, nicely written. I have no complaints :D

~lily

Hello!

This is one of the best ffs I've read in a really long time. I like it. No, scratch that. I love it.

I love the grammar, vocabulary, plot, characters... everything.

And I hope Meiling dies slowly and painfully in the next 24 hours. :D And so the other 3 "females" ... who, by the way, I imagine as really ugly-looking women (or the so) with bad breath and defects like that (because of the way Sesshoumaru is so disgusted by them lol)... And well, Meiling... Oh, Meiling... Hahaha I imagine her as one of those whores you find in cliché movies that call out to a man with their pointing finger, wearing something stupidly attractive and yet disgusting.

I hope you update soon!

I like how things are going between Sessh and Kagome. But I'm worried about what just happened... Don't leave us hanging for too long.

:)

xoxo

That was well worth the wait. :)

This story is AWESOME!!! I love not only your writing style but your development is superb! When I got to the end of chapter 4 and saw there wasn't another one yet I all but wept!! This is a brilliant idea for a story, I've never seen anything like it before. I so want to beat Meiling for what she's doing...then slap the hell out of Sesshomaru's mother! If that bitch is willing to use her power over Sesshomaru to abuse him in such a fashion, like he said RAPE him, then how can his mother think think she will be a good mate or Lady of the West? Someone willing to do something like that won't care about the good of anyone else, much less the good of her people and lands, all they'll care about is getting what they want and damn anyone else. Not to mention that once he mates her and the power flips (aka he actually has CHOICE again and can enforce his will) that he will EVER want to bed Meiling again? OOO, I'm hopping over here! I really hope you update soon!!

Oh I SO agree with Snowbird - well put!  It WAS insulting for her to get drunk, but I also understand the pain aspect.  Meiling...what a piece of work she is...this should be very interesting as it plays out.  This story is as awesome as it is well written.

Love it! :) please write more and I hope you are having a wrick summer

This story is absolutely amazing! It has left me captivated and begging for more. I truly hope that the next chapter will be as interesting as the previous four. (:

Hmm...I suppose I can see all that as plausable....but Kagome falt a little more bi-polar in this chapter. Not too bad, just a bit odd. Especially her instant calm/anger before her telling him her choice of compensation.

On the other hand, that was some interesting reactions from Sesshoumaru towards the end. Those mental restraints are only so strong, and bound to snap sometime...especially if something so tempting like Kagome comes along and plays the lover. XP

Awesome chapter!! Very origional! the lengths some people will go! wonder how sess found the whole thing!

cant wait for next chapter! hope its just as long XD

this is awesome!! can't wait to read more!!

huh....I suppose I can see that from Kagome....even if she has been there for 3 years. Poor Sesshoumaru, Fighting with instincts is a hard thing....especially for one with a true animal nature.

This story is really a wonderful plot! I just love the true talent of your writing. Please keep up the excellent writing I'm thoroughly enjoying myself!

This is a very superior story.  I'm enjoying it so much I can't even tell you!  Your depiction of Kagome and Sesshoumaru is well-thought out and yet still in character.  I can't believe it's only been 4 chapters!   I want to read and read and read until I have this honestly great story finished.  Thanks for raising the rating, although I don't see what all of those namby-pamby complainers could've been griping about.  Anything written before you changed it certainly didn't exceed a T.  Especially on this site!  I do so love my lemons, and M rating lemons are sooo much more delicious!  I am anticipating lovely citrusy tidbits when Kagome and Sesshoumaru finally get around to admitting the truth to each other.  And, I can't wait to see Kagome give Meiling (that avaricious bitch!) the what-for when she finds out how that demoness has been 'using' Sesshoumaru.  That will be priceless.  Sure, everyone knows that Sesshoumaru has brought home a miko...but he hasn't dropped the big bomb yet:  He brought home the Shikon miko!  Hee, hee, hee, watch the fur fly, babies!  And I do mean that in the literal sense!  Keep up the astonishing work.  I can't wait to read the next chapters.

So far...I really like it. I feel you have kept them in character while twisiting them into an interesting plot.

I'm looking forward to continuing my reading of this work of fiction. <3