This story is amazing!!! I hope Sesshoumaru wipes that filthy scum from the earth <_<
I just want to say that I am completely sucked in. I love the originality of the story, but how you're still getting the characters so right on. The scene between Kimikyo, Inu Taisho and Izayoi was so well done. It was such a fresh persepctive and I felt myself feeling completely gratified with how Kimikyo handled the situation. She said everythig I would have wanted her to say and to have her let down her mask and unveil her feelings very powerful and intense. You did an excellent job of havign her lose her composure without making her weak. The whole scene to me, only showed how truely strong she is. Needless to say, I like her :)
In only two chapters you have devloped a very rich storyline and characters. I am completely wrapped up in it and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!
These two chapters were beautiful dear. I love the mystery of the letters and how they get Sess to face the issues with his Father and why things happen as they did. This is wonderful!
O_O So interesting!!!! Moer please!
Wow! This is really exciting! Please continue!
Oh~ This is so exciting!
I love how you made somethings very obvious, but you have reserved others. It keeps this interesting. I enjoy how in-character Sesshoumaru is. Please keep it up! He's a hard character, but you're doing wonderful! The details do not smother this nor is it too sparse that I cannot imagine anything. I love how the letters are written and the proverbs you have chosen. Gorgeous. Please continue writing. I look forward to the next update!
Ashes (Chapter 2) - Thu 21 Jul 2011
Cool. I like this, even though I'm kinda sad feeling like it's going to end badly by what the letters reflect. Well done.
Aki (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Jul 2011
Very interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter!
BMT (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Jul 2011
I like this story! Please update soon! :)
P.S. I have read a few of your other stories, I love those as well. You are talented! Keep it up!
o.o more please!
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