I love the stories of time-travel (even if it were letters doing so) that are well-written, but not to mention how everything was just barely on the edge. The ending is almost not enough, yet it is, definitely satisfying. It's just enough. Well-written. I absolutely loved reading it.
Sheenio (Chapter 5) - Mon 23 May 2016
Usually, short chapter stories always seem...incomplete. THIS one, however...I have to say, I just sat here for several minutes simply staring at 'the end' and thinking to myself how well done this story is written. I really enjoyed this, though I wish there was a moment to explain exactly how Kagome was able to send those scrolls to him. Regardless- instant favorite!
dxlmao (Chapter 5) - Sat 14 May 2016
Yes, open ending that let's the reader run away with his or her own imagination, but there are so many things I wanted to know and it's kind of unsatisfying. It was however a perfect ending to this story, I can just imagine it's like one of those endings in anime where boy meets girl after a long time and there's a slight breeze as they stare at each other with wide eyes. It's very sweet.
lovely! Very good story !
nice short story
-happy sigh-
This is twice now you've managed to make me cry...
Fine job, Caleesci
so he found her in the end? that's nice
That was so EPICALLY awesome!!!!! Wow! You are an amazing writer!
*you are way too qood. .
ive read almost all of your stories and they always leave me speechless
and cravinq for more. .
the way you write is just wow. .
I do hope you write some sequel for some of the stories..
i'll be readinq that for sure. .:)
anyway, thank you for sharinq. .keep up the qood work. . *
Wow, what an amazing little story! I couldn't stop reading. You sewned their lives together so perfectly, and at the end, I had goosebumps on my arms!
Great job! This is def a new favorite :)
alloverthisfic (Chapter 5) - Tue 06 Sep 2011
The ending was perfect. Don't listen to those other reviewers begging for more chapters, because any good reader can fill in the rest with their own imagination. Thank you for writing and sharing this great story with us. I'm just letting you know that I really appreciate your work exactly the way that it is. :)
Tana (Chapter 5) - Wed 24 Aug 2011
Wow, this was one beautifully written, enthralling story. I love how it covered so much without having so many chapters. And yay he saved her and then found them! I don't feel that the ending was very abrupt, it was nice how you left it off. While a sequel could be done, it's not necessary, for me all the loose ends were tied up and besides, my own imagination provides the whole "and they all lived happily ever after" bit. You are one talented author girly so I'm off to go check out some of your other stories ;)
eryn (Chapter 5) - Tue 16 Aug 2011
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! Its worse than a cliffhanger!!! I want more. TT_____TT
wow! that was good!
That story kept me enthralled through out the whole thing! That was a fantastic end and It almost made me cry! I hope you write more stories because you have a real talent!
-Becky
hkyadte (Chapter 5) - Fri 12 Aug 2011
omg thus is such agood story!!! You r one of my fav authors!!!!
An interesting story. I liked it.
Beautiful ending! He saved her and fulfilled his destiny...how romantic.
I felt that it ended so abruptly...Im glad for the happy ending though! :)
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