"I miss Daddy."

She made sure her voice wouldn't waver before answering. "I miss your daddy too."

Please please please just tell me you didn't kill him. o.o

Other than that the story is amazingly written. ^.^

AAAaah -sighs in delight-, that was good. I'm amazed at the progression of your writing. It seems that even though you are a very good author to begin with, you hone your skills greatly with each chapter.XD Gambatte! Dewa mata

aaah, that was a wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next

ooh...i'm on the edge of my seat. i can hardly wait for more!! Hi, hikari! lol, we keep bumping into eachother. ;D

REALLY liking this story, sorry it's giving you fits, though. Love how you dealt with Kikyo, cause she is not my favorite person. Love how you keep Sess in character, which can be a difficult task. What little he does reveal through speech or action has to mean alot and it has to be clear to the readers. After all, his reasons are his own... Love the treatment of all the kids, they all act like real children might. Glad you didn't kill off Kouga (yet anyway, the story isn't finished) I was worried... Really like Kagome! Her innocence was stripped from her, but it revealed the heart and soul of a true survivor! I'm eager for more!

Aw, Sesshy's frustrated and irritated. Want a bicky? -pat pat- now now, good boy, don't be giving Indigo-sama to many headaches, will ya? XD Dewa mata

Well, let me tell you, you CAN'T stop now! This story is getting so good and I could never forgive you for just leaving it hanging. You have to finish it.

Great story. I've never seen a story where Inuyasha basically goes postal like this, so I'd love to read more and see how it plays out.

Your writing is perfect! I hope this is going to turn into a big, fat multi-chapter epic!

evil cliffie, beautiful writing

-ducks a flying strawberry- -wipes unshed tears from her blue-grey eyes- -Bows with respect, gratitude and something akin to awe at the talented writer- Dewa mata XD

I can hardly wait to see where this story ends up. :)

...that's was wonderful. You made me cry.

Thank you sooooo much for the double update! It took away a lot of the sting from the cliffie last time! I really enjoyed these chapters, and I can't wait to see what you write next!

Argh! -falls dramatically in an overacted slow motion, spitting false blood and holding a red painted banana to her chest- An evil cliffie cornered me!! Hum. I can feel the plot turn coming. What makes you hesitate? If you feel your plot needs some sacrifice, don't think about what the readers would say if it goes this or that way, the important is that you respect what you have in mind. Whatever happens, I'll still love your story and read it with delight. Next time, this Hikari chan will explain how to avoid said evil cliffie with a strawberry. XD Dewa mata

This story is great and I really like the flow of things. The way you portray Sesshoumaru is fantastic. All of his emotions (or lack thereof) and the way he speaks is spot on. I'm hopeful you won't be changing the existing chapters at all.

Gyaaa! How could leave such a cliffie? It hurts me! I need the next chapter!

Oh my sweet Lord! Another amazing chapter. The action was riveting and the foreshadowing was very tense and artful. It was very beautifully written, conveying a dark, mysterious tone. As far as the spellings go, I really think it's a matter of personal preference; all of them are legitimate, although I read something once about the "ou" in Sesshoumaru being a more accurate stress to the vowel...extending the "o" or whatnot. I normally see Sesshoumaru, tetsusaiga and taiyoukai, but again, I think they're interchangable.

Hey!! Nice chapter you have here. ^_^ First things first: You can spell Sess' name however you want, it's a question of pronouciation really. The "o" in Sesshoumaru is accentuated, so I prefer to write it "ou", you could write it "ô", like in the name "Kyô", or just "o" if you want to. Both are admitted. The fang's correct name is "Tessaiga" (there's a commone kanji with Sesshoumaru's name, you wouldn't write it "Setsushoumaru", would you? ^_^ Tayoukai is another largely accepted... mistake. In Cannon, I mean. Sess, and Inu-Papa for what it matters, are both said to be Daiyoukais, "Dai" meaning big, or great, whatever. I don't know why they changed it in the fandom, but as far as I'm concerned, it's still a spelling mistake. XD To finish my Dai-review, about the format... Well, I write my own chapters in open office with the left-aligned format, and then paste it on Dokuga, and it seems to work. I never add html tags... I don't play with what I don't understand -snickers- I hope my exlpanation was clear enough -sheepish grin- Thank you for taking my own reading comfort into consideration, I really appreciate that a great deal. You have my total and complete gratitude. -deep bow- Anyway, Dewa mata ^_^