This was an AWESOME chapter. The eerie feeling lurks, the anger, betrayal yet love and relief from the parents too. I'm really impressed with this chapter :)
This was horrible :cries: Poor everyone! And what about Kagome!
.... bad faiths
star2bcaught (Chapter 68) - Thu 29 Sep 2011
it has to work, they are fate, if they are wrong, they just whip out the "well that's fate" card
Spell checker 74 (Chapter 67) - Wed 28 Sep 2011
“Amaterasu. Though I try to see the justice of your ways, I cannot condemn this.” Inu no Taisho spoke up for the first time.
In this line you wrote condemn instead of condone
Chrissie (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Sep 2011
How can one god make this decision. Obviously this isn't a christian religion and people aren't followers of one god... since there are many... how can this one god decide that she can take away another gods powers at her whim... without any of the other gods knowing or being apart of a counsel to do it... and she is doing it to cover up her own mistake and the mistakes of the fates... I think that the rest of the gods should miraculously appear and deem she correct her mistake and make amends to Sesshomaru... and she get demoted to that of only dealing with the sun... and have her chosens taken from her and given to the God of war... that works...
Inupapa is so not helping... and how come Inuyasha doesn't just say Sess can have Kagome as his chosen... and they can share like it was already going to be.
*facepalm* So not helping, Inupapa. It seems to me that most of the Kami in this story were dropped on their heads when they were first created.
JeniNeji (Chapter 67) - Wed 28 Sep 2011
That not so helpful either Inu no Taisho... =_=
eryn (Chapter 66) - Tue 27 Sep 2011
I feel so bad for Sesshoumaru right now. Poor man.
Inuyasha sticking up for Sesshomaru after he loses Kagome as his Chosen? I say go Inuyasha. About time someone told Amaterasu off. I agree. It's just so wrong. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Chrissie (Chapter 1) - Mon 26 Sep 2011
I don't get it... so is she also demoting him as a god too... go back to the lord of the western lands???? wasn't that a ruse to raise kagome? Wipe his memories... what so he isn't mad about her mistake... ? Poor Sesshomaru. I hope that the other gods go against her regardless and save sesshomaru.
O_O
:cries:
JeniNeji (Chapter 64) - Thu 22 Sep 2011
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vision (Chapter 64) - Thu 22 Sep 2011
That is NOT a solution, thats the easy way out for the Kami and the Fates! Poor Sesshomaru!
SanityRequired (Chapter 63) - Thu 22 Sep 2011
Wow, I love your story! It's really original, and I can't wait to see what comes next! Baby-Kagome sounds adorable too. ^.^
eryn (Chapter 63) - Thu 22 Sep 2011
God of War. Yikes. It certainly does fit him.
Don't MESS with the God of WAR!
I'm just sayin'.
CONGRATS ON REVIEW # 100!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not goood...but BUT
um... okies. WHYFOR is Sesshomaru bound? O_o nerf... I's confused...
Thanks for writing.
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