Le Gasp!! 150 Words?! That's 50 more than usual! You don't have to feel obligated to add extra words, 100's fine although, 25,000 is better *wink*

Also leave it to Kagome to not walk around in a circle or turn around 360 degrees before she tries to vault herself out of a well, geez. lol

And I think you did wonders with your extra 50 words, because this is the most suspensful cliffy chapter ever!! (that I can recall, there are lost of chapters!) I can't wait until the next one comes out, what's below the well floor?! Why do I have a feeling that its like a horror film and I should be yelling at a TV screen telling her to turn around?

I do not agree, Lauren.

I am thoroughly enjoying this fic. I do not know where you are reading, but this is most definietly a story that is not like anything else I have read. It is very different and I appreciate its uniquness. I believe the characters are very well written and is assuringly in character. Besides, even if you belive they are not, it is her story, not yours. They are to be developed as she deems fit.

Lilli, you are doing an amazing job. You are a superb writer! I cant wait for an update!

-MissKatt

With the exception of last chapter, I like this story. It's not an original idea by far, but you're building a framework around the characters and a context for them to exist in, so I can appreciate that much. ^^ I hope that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha get more in character as the story progresses (as of now, we only see flashes of their habits and absolutely nothing of their personality). I can only see it being more difficult for them to be in characer as they take care of/raise Kagome. *crosses fingers*

Well, here's to a good start~

P.S.: Oh! 'Anata' is an informal way of saying 'you'. 'Baby' in Japanese is 'aka-chan'. And 'dapocaginous' isn't a word in English.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

aaahhh I miss the 200 word chapters *sigh* oh well, and YAY! she disappears in the middle of the night, her mom will once again have a heart attack. lol well actually that's not funny.

Grammar (lol) Question:

"as if she were actually living them." *Would that be was? as in..."as if she was actually living them"? I read your original sentence and it sounds right, but doesn't really sound right at the same time. and "was" sounds right, but doesn't at the same time. It's really confusing. Well, at least for me it is. Idk up to you.

Random Questions:

"in reality fell straight down a circular opening," Are you referring to the well? If you are, why did you use circular to describe it, when the well is square/rectangular?

:snicker-snorts: oh. my. GOSH. Jaken as a gift from his mother is PRICELESS> ^_^

Thanks for writing.

Hahahahhahahahaha!  I picture Sesshomaru looking down his nose at the kappa and thinking to himself, "Just kill me know."

Birthday? HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! ...yay...except it's a little late...lol YAY Your present is this fantaboulus Review, and a purple sparkly bow. Next time you see one, grab it. It's yours.

I love his mommy! She so...darling lol Amazing!!

Also You totally tricked me! Who names a chapter "Arrival" Then not have Kagome finally arrive in the fuedal era?! Thats what I was totally expecting! But nooo, you had to think outside the box and lead me on! the arrival of Jaken?! He gets his own chapter!? WHAT?! ...I guess thats alright, the end is soon(ish)

She's finally fifteen! :me is excited:

Ahh the big question eh? Well her life will be changing quite soon! Hopefully for the better, she needs some excitement!

I found your story today and finished all of the chapters already. I cannot wait until the next update. Where did you get the idea for the story? It's so different. I really like it. =)

ahh! the time grows nearer till they are reunited, like three star crossed...people...making their way out of the haze of despair that had been tormenting them ever since they started dreaming of what could be

:D Kagome will come soon!

Yey!

gorgeous story. I love how you've brought everything together. I can't wait to see how it pans out.

Yay Halloween!! lol

at least Kagome can actually hit something! Sometimes she really sucks

Confusing Mistakes (lol yea idk i guess this is a mistake category now):

"Swinging it onto her shoulder, she made her way down the hallway and into the changing rooms, where she put on the school exercise outfit, grabbed her bow and arrows from their place in the archery shed."

*the last clause of the sentence doesn't make sense with how the sentence is structured. It seemed as if an and is missing. Idk how you would actually like to fix that, its up to you, a preference thing. lol

Easiest suggestion:

here she put on the school exercise outfit, and grabbed her bow and arrows from their place in the archery shed."

How bittersweetly cute.

Thanks for writing.

Yeah, I too would have an obsession with that particular shade of silver....and white furry animals looking so much like dogs....

:3

oh...my....GAWD! I totally remember this! It was from LJ for the silver prompt. I read it and was like hmm, sounds good, but I didn't really understand it. BUT NOW, now that its put into context it makes total and complete sense! I didn't know it was for this story! I LOVE IT! It's like building suspence for when they finally meet! yay lol

Also this might throw off your word count but:

"prompting her friends to to question her about what she had seen." You, my dear, have a repeated word.

Ehrm... <--that was mine xD