Reviews for Sesshoumaru's Torture by amy

dancingfingers (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Oct 2014

The room suddenly feels hot (LOL).

Anyway, the idea is great, but I'm sorry to say this: This is too rushed. Besides, I think even the most saint woman would be mad if she is stood up while the said man/lover/husband is having... certain activities... with another woman. or women in this case. Sesshomaru needs some a**-whipping first before Kagome takes him back... but well, it's only my opinion.

Either way, I enjoy reading it!

 


bookgirl813 (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Oct 2014

Once again, you have such a great idea, but cram it into a one-shot.  I know it's very difficult to write a chapter story and hard to stick with it - that's why I've only completed a handfull.  But you've got so much going on that it could be broken up so that the ideas don't get so lost.  

This is really a cute story and it sounds like Kagome's business is a day spa for the extremely stressed businesswoman.  Nice!


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