Reviews for Time Floats On by Smortz

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RubyJeweler (Chapter 13) - Thu 26 Jan 2012

An update? YES! <3

Kagome's situation with Sesshomaru is making me frustrated. *Takes out chainsaw and rushes Kagura*

If only it were that easy to finish her off, but of course, the b**** can fly. Mweh. Thank you so much for the update, and I hope to read more. ^^


Selazul (Chapter 13) - Thu 26 Jan 2012

Oh so painful. Love it. It literally hurts to read it because of kagomes pain and the turmoil of their screwed up relationship. It's absolutely divine.


amy (Chapter 12) - Thu 26 Jan 2012

Wonderful chappie, encore! More please!


Shadowstarprinces Pridestar (Chapter 13) - Thu 26 Jan 2012

why u repost it the same chapter


Sessygurl (Chapter 13) - Wed 25 Jan 2012

*gulps* O_O WOW!!! Enough said.


Loveyaa (Chapter 12) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

That was jam packed with every kind of emotion. everything is building up and I can't wait to see this climb and what it leads to. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Caleesci (Chapter 12) - Sat 10 Dec 2011

Hey! this is fantastic! I like how Kagome is developing. And can I just say that the way you have portrayed Rin is absolutely freaking adorable? I love her, shes such a little brat!!

 

Calee


m. (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Dec 2011

Thank you for updating!

I thoroughly enjoy your story. Its well written and the storyline is great. I would reveiw more but unfortunately, reviewing through my phone is impossible... =/

However, I just want to make a note. The concept of Kag wanting to "climb to the top" and achieve a "higher level on the demon ladder" to prove herself is a little repetitious. I truly do understand that it's the basis for the storyline. Regardless, keep up the good work!


Time on my hands (Chapter 12) - Sat 03 Dec 2011

I wonder how many men have had to choose what is most important to them... and then had to live with the regret of making the wrong choice? It took him a while, but Sesshoumaru has begun to realize how much he lost. The question is, has he lost it forever? Only time, and an amazing storyteller will reveal all. I am so in love with this story. Just as in the manga and anime, Kagome started out as a somewhat of a doormat, putting everyone else and their wants and needs first. Then she evolved into a strong, self assured woman capable of reaching her dreams on her own. Thank you for posting this story. I will be patiently awaiting the next chapter.


SapphireBeauty167 (Chapter 11) - Tue 29 Nov 2011

I love this chapter! We get a little hint of what kind of hanyou Rin is. I was pretty shocked to learn that Kagura was Naraku's sister, but I think that will work out pretty awesome-ly in this fic. I hope you update soon! :) 


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 11) - Mon 28 Nov 2011

Another amazing story so far.  I cannot wait for the next chapter. 

 

--Kaminoko (c)2011


Sessygurl (Chapter 11) - Sun 27 Nov 2011

Wow, what a reveal! I loved every moment.

Be careful with Kagura acting like Kagome, I think you mixed the two up there. Other than that thanks so much, I cant wait till the next chapter.

Im so glad we got to see what Rin was:)


Celeste (Chapter 10) - Fri 25 Nov 2011

Your story is what I can read over and over again. Your writing is truly magnificient! Your writing for Kagome and Sesshomaru's characters is simply supberb. I absolutely love independent Kagome! She doesn't take no crap from anyone, she stands up for herself, she's driven, she's ambitious, and courageous. Kagome deserves to come out on top after what Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru has put her through. Mainly, I want to beat the living you know what out of Sesshomaru. I would like to see more interaction with Kagome and Christopher. He seems like a well-rounded guy if he was given the chance. Maybe a date or something. Also, more interaction with Naraku. It seems fun and dramatic! Sesshomaru has really done it this time. You know how the saying goes... "You don't lose something until it's actually gone." He has to work his butt off if he wants Kagome back. He has to grovel and beg for forgiveness. But, he let's his stupid pride get in the way of it. Rin is so cute! She just says things that comes to her mind. I like to commend you for your good work. Please update soon.


FayeMegan (Chapter 10) - Thu 24 Nov 2011

I just read all the chapters thus far in one sitting. I love it, I really needed some drama. Can't wait for more!!


Sessygurl (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 Nov 2011

About damn time Sesshoumaru!!! Can you put in a little bit more background about Rin, like whay type of hanyou is she?

This was definately one of your best, especally if you can shut me up....lol love ya


Alice (Chapter 10) - Tue 22 Nov 2011

This chapter was perfect. Rin is so cute. :3 I'm so proud of Kagome and I'm happy Sesshoumaru admitted his feelings! :3 I'm excited, can't wait for the next chapter~


Sandreline Moon (Chapter 10) - Tue 22 Nov 2011

LOVE this chapter!  When I reached the end, I was furious.  I was so mad my mouse wouldn't let me scroll down anymore to read more - I demand another update asap!

Can't wait!

 

~Sandreline


Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Nov 2011
Aloha, God bless you as you go through your surgeries. Have faith in the Lord. We will pray for fast recovery. Take care and aloha. Mahalo! I love how the story is going. Kagome is great in your story! Its going to be one hell of a luncheon! Can't wait to see how it all goes down. Hope that Kagome succeeds at the end and still be the same selfless and positive person that she is. Can't wait for MORE! Aloha from Hawaii and God bless! :)

Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Mon 21 Nov 2011
OMG! I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION! IT IS BY FAR 'THE' BEST ONE I'VE READ THROUGH EVER. I WAS SO SAD WHEN YOU STOPPED AT CHAPTER 9 THOUGH. PLEASE, WRITE MORE! I'M GOING TO KEEP CHECKING TO SEE IF YOU'VE UPDATED WITH MORE CHAPTERS. I SERIOUSLY CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE AND FIND OUT WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT! I TOLD MY FAMILY ABOUT YOUR FANFICTION AND THEY ALL READ IT, TOO! PLEASE, WRITE MORE! PLEASE WRITE MORE! PLEASE, WRITE MORE! WE ARE SUPER EXCITEDFOR WHATS TO COME! PLEASE, DON'T STOP NOW! FREAKING LOVE IT! =)

Loveyaa (Chapter 9) - Thu 10 Nov 2011

And we are figuring out where everybody stands with everybody. I wonder how Rin will shake things up and effect everything and I esp wonder how you are going to get Sesshoumaru and Kagome back together. I can't wait to see what happens next and who takes who down :)


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