I quite enjoyed the story that you are telling. The emotion behind everything is quite enchanting. I like that you get to understand the characters but only by so much as they are willing to let loose when around each other. I really hope that you continue on and we get to see how things play out. The father that is wise enough to see what is being lost and hopefully all ends well. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

woo!! I luffs it! I might have to do this challenge :P