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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Wed 07 Jan 2015

Good chapter, keep it coming Happy New Year

candy (Chapter 6) - Mon 05 Jan 2015

I think this is a good story needs some work on the spelling but coming together nicely.

beachvilla (Chapter 6) - Mon 05 Jan 2015

Yay update. Thought it was great. Can't wait for the next. 

nia (Chapter 6) - Mon 05 Jan 2015

weewww.... can't wait for the next chapter~

mango (Chapter 6) - Mon 05 Jan 2015

Happy to see the update! I like how their relationship is progressing thus far and am looking forward to seeing how it grows. The red string of fate is a topic I've always been interested in too.

Eden (Chapter 5) - Sun 08 Jun 2014

Not to sound greedy but MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Kitsune Diva (Chapter 5) - Sat 26 Apr 2014

I like your story very much.  I like that the red thread of fate the center for the story.  I look forward to reading more.

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Sat 08 Mar 2014

Great story, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!

Sora (Chapter 5) - Sat 08 Mar 2014

Wonderful update! I can't wait to see what happens next.

dancingfingers (Chapter 4) - Wed 26 Feb 2014

Hmm... and I thought you are aware of everything, Sesshoumaru... ever heard Shikon no Miko? No? Well, that human girl is the one, you know *snort*

dancingfingers (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Feb 2014

For first fanfic and first chapter, this is really a good start :)

beachvilla (Chapter 4) - Mon 24 Feb 2014

Enjoying your story. Can't wait to see what happens. 

Ritter (Chapter 4) - Mon 24 Feb 2014

I am in love with your story so far!! Please keep it up!!

Cheebers McGee (Chapter 1) - Mon 24 Feb 2014

I just started just this very moment. I really like your beginning. Perhaps take a bit more time to flush out the backstory some, as not everyone is aware of the red string of fate. :) 

Sora (Chapter 4) - Mon 24 Feb 2014



OMG! I was waiting this story for ages! I gave up waiting every other story I follow except this one!

I never hoped to see it, but here it is! Thank you so much! I wish you a lot of inspiration and free time. 

chili (Chapter 3) - Mon 24 Feb 2014


I'm enjoying your story so far.  But a 2 small comments that could make it better:

1. Gravity is 9.8 METERS per second per second (i.e. the rate at which the speed of Kagome's fall is increasing, is 9.8 meters per second)

2. The story feels really rushed.  It's almost as if I'm reading story notes.  I wouldn't mind a little more detail in the interactions between the characters


cherry20052 (Chapter 4) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

Now this is an interesting and fun idea for a story. Hopefully it doesn't taken you as long to update the next chapter. XD

Caera (Chapter 4) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

Cute story.Hope you will be inspired to finish it.

Kitsune Diva (Chapter 3) - Sun 02 Oct 2011

I like your story very much and look forward to reading more.

Xaleria07 (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Aug 2011

I hope you continue cuz I want to see more of sexy Sesshoumaru! :3 Even though he appeared in this chapter, not much action with him yet. I'm anticipating how he and Kagome duke it out. 

And besides the little mistakes that slip the eye here and there (but don't we all have those?), it's overall a pretty good story. :) I love red strings of fate! They just make everything so amusing! 

Also, will Inuyasha be totally jealous when he finds out that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are destined (kyaaaa love triangle?! XD).

Update when you can. :)

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