I hope uou update   this is great

Great story, keep it coming.

Great stroy, I think Chaos Ninja had a good idea. Is this chapter prelude to the idea that Sesshumara likes Kagome? Update soon, I really want to know what you're going to come up with next.

Love it! I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to do next? I would think that he would be able to smell Kagome's inocence since he is a full dog demon.

I really like your story.  It has a good plot line and the story moves somewhat smoothly, but you really need to have someone read your chapters befor eyou post them.  There are some distracting grammatical erros within your work. By finxing these things your story would flow much better.  Like I mentioned before I really do like your story and will continue to read it. 

Love it... This bass me hooked please update sooon

awesome story more please

Love your story! Hope you update again soon!!!

I like it. Update soon

I do like the story so far, only real things I can comment about is your writing style which will only improve with writing more , your writing is basic which is not a bad thing but I say write more and keep improving and I hope to be able to read more of this story soon!

This is pretty good! I'm curious as to why Sango turned on her in the first place, and I'm definitely looking forward to how you'll have everyone realize that the rumors about her are untrue. I'm not sure if you plan to make Kagome a virgin in this story, but if so, you should somehow get Hisako to "mention" in front of the boys that he smelt she was a virgin, maybe he ran into her right after she got caught in the rain and was able to make out her scent, or some other thing like that. Then Sesshy and the other demons will get curious, and maybe actually pay attention to her scent and realize that she isn't actually a whore. It's just an idea, in case you ever get stuck. Update soon please! :D

You started off pretty good. You are laying the plot on in some doses, which is nice. Its a different type of plot which is a breath of fresh air. I cant wait to read the next chaper, good luck!